All Comments on 'Bubbling up'

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monkeykinglivesmonkeykinglives11 months ago

Perfect. Next chapter, please.

stewartbstewartb11 months ago

This has ended where a good writer would continue ... now that you have our imagination by the tail [pun intended] ! Please give part 2 a shot.

PappasleazePappasleaze11 months ago

Amy needs to come back for seconds. Maybe Mandy can get her turn. Jane fines that she needs to know what all went on and get so turned on she needs to work on making it all happen while she is there. she finds that she loves the humiliation of her two best friends with her guy and she has to watch, listen. cook, clean or whatever while they are together. good job here but definitely need more chapters. I gave this 5 stars.

enjoy_readingenjoy_reading11 months ago

Amy did get fucked well and much more. So one more roommate to go.

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