All Comments on 'Buried Treasure Ch. 31-35'

There is nothing more rewardting than opening Literotica and finding a new partwolf chapter posted. Things are heating up and getting exciting. Thanks once again for sharing this story with us.

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I check and see more Buried Treasure chapters and it brings a smile.

Continuity issues...

Originally, Chase was supposed to be giving up his Nomad cut, and Mongo refused to consider letting Rori leave the Steel Ladies at all. Chase then explained that Rori leaving the Steel Ladies wasn't even necessary because the Steel Ladies weren't under investigation in the first place, unlike the Brotherhood. Also, Rori was never described as having Nomad designation. Now, suddenly, they're *both* Nomads, and they're *both* giving up their cuts, despite the fact that Rori doesn't have a brotherhood cut in the first place! She's a Steel Lady! Gah!

Getting there. Are the Sons on the way out?

The woman recognizing her was a weak plot device... Dyed hair... A hat and dark shades and even her mother wouldn't recognise her...

-jaye-