All Comments on 'Buried Treasure Ch. 41-45'

Partwolf, Keep up the good work. Love the way this story is going.

That was a bloody chapter. Hope Vic's all right.

Meh.

Change to title is in but might take a few days

Once again great job. The excitement just keeps building and the story continues to flow. Thanks again for another great read.

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Partwolf, this is as good as the best novels that I have ever read and I have read a lot of them. I just know that some sleazy ass publisher is going to snap you up, one of these days and we'll all be standing there with big sad puppy dog eyes.

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PN

You lost me at the end when Vic was hurt. There was no indication of hearing shots or pain until Joe had to help him walk.

Nice ,hope Vic is ok

No mention of Vic getting shot, just Joe saying "Fuck, Vic" and running "back in" and helping Vic walk out. Accidental deletion? Oversight? What?

Another one. In "Treasure" John Coffey was a good man, a good alpha, and part of the the reason Beta Ron decided to leave the Bitterroot pack. In Buried Treasure, he's an unmitigated bastard and murderer. Wtf.

Sorry, that should've been on the next chapter.

Didn't read Vic getting shot, just him reporting it. Have they underestimated the Sons?