All Comments on 'Burned Ch. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

hot!

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 6 years ago
Too goddam many people to keep straight.

You need a friggin flow chart to keep track of who's who.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Gone beyond

Lost the way in last chapter. Couldn't even be bothered finishing this one. Why doesn't he just break it off with Leah, he obviously doesn't want or need her in his life. He has enough fucking playmates locally.

Just feel for Leah. He gas abandoned her when she needs his help, advice and support the most. What does he do, fucks some slut with her brother, then decides to fuck around with his mother. With lovers like that Leah would do better with fingers and dildos.

Rapier875Rapier875almost 2 years ago

Not so good with Mum, this is supposed to be about cousins.

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