All Comments on 'Burning Bridges'

It was a very nice surprise to see a story by you in the new list this morning, and an even more wonderful surprise to see you'd submitted your first lesbian story.

You did a brilliant job with it. It is highly sensual and erotic; a very complete story and highly believable. Your great strength is characterization, and this story was no exception. Great attention to detail, too!

Well done!

Lou x

A wonderful story about natural feelings and discovering the pleasure. Keep up the good work

The words, the actions, so beautiful, to describe love of that special kind which is smply sublime. You write so well that it would be wonderful if you also share the same passions that you describe.

Anita.

At last a story with real passion and romance. Too many on this site have the usual girl meets girl, girl takes girl home and girl/girl do it. Here we have two people who really do get to know each other first. Indeed, hopefully a sequel to this story with perhaps a hint of sadness, bitterness - perhaps something long ago before the marriage, a secret? I am merely a reader looking for inspiration for my next novel. Yours has touched my heart, congratulations.

If your a neophyte in writing I can't wait to read your work as you gain experience.

Very tender and gentle approach to the sadness and frustration that has been expressed.

The writing explores the feelings and how women tend to give more than men do. Writers like this show how females can more accurately portray emotions than men

the build up in your story is so captivating, u feel their emotions..a beautiful touching story.. xxx

loved the story it was very classy there aye.. and a great depth of feeling.. and im a dkye.. and i dont know if its that guys cant feel that depth of emotion..more that they have been taught they can't.. i mean if a woman goes to another woman because of a bad guy.. i didnt think it was.. well guys suck lets try a girl..

oh i wasnt saying this to your story.. just a post i read under it.. and then im not attacking just wondering..

i mean if a woman winds up with a woman shouldnt it just be that she wants a woman, not needs a good excuse? i do like this story though..

Lovely story. I love how you took time to develop the characters. I also liked your emphasis on sensuality and feelings instead of on raw very graphic sex. Nothing wrong with graphic sex, but sometimes I do love more sensual stories, and they are harder to find!

Great work!

It was great. I think you should be very proud of yourself. Really. It's just as I would expect in print.

I did get caught short with the phrase about "schoolgirl", though. Does anyone still use that word?

As the forward says, this is not a wank story. The pace, the style, the emotion- all near perfect and all so believable. Some of the lines convey the simmering passion in ways that few words can; they moistened my eyes in the best possible way. No, it's not a "Reach for the nightstand and hope your batteries are up to the task" story. It's a "Curl up under the blanket and go to sleep with a smile on your face" story. So much the better.

Thank You & Take Care,

Penny

Loved the story and the way you wrote it and everything about it but I must dis-agree with one thing. IT IS HOT!!

Thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us.

Your writing skills are superb. Thank you for sharing this erotic story in such a graceful manner. Please write again. I wish I could submit a 6.

Just give me a warm friend and a good story and I'm happy for V day! I might just read this one to my partner on the 13th and see how it works..

From someone who rarely uses that word in a public comment! very readable, believable characterizations, with exquisite detail and superb pacing. A model for future top-level Lesbian stories!

A breath of fresh air, written by a man, no less! (a quiet dig) Stupendous! Fabulous! Wonderful! Seriously impressed with your look into a lesbian relationship (or beginning of one).

KUDOS, handsome.

v~

"My mind wanders down the path of our discovery, replaying encounters, wondering just when it was that she entered my soul, bestowing a sense of fulfillment that I had never before had the courage to accept."

You certainly nailed this! Extraordinarily well done, neon.

~Imp

very well written. the build up was most erotic and left me begging for more

This story was incredible. One of my favorite things is a build up of sexual tension. I hope that you have other stories...

The introduction to your story made me aphrensive but as your story unfolded it grew on me and, yes, I will read it again.

Thank you for awakening hidden desires

Wow. You've certainly captured the stomach twisting excitement of new love. It is filled with such passion, understanding,and sensual caring. The stuff of dreams.

I’ve read all your stories now. You’re an incredibly good writer, and this is one of my favorites. Thank you for shearing your exquisite, delicate and sensual kind’of’mind. Can not ask you enough to Please, please give us more.

Good title. Good story with right amont of sex so as not to detract from the story. Rarely readl lesbian stories, im male, and this is my first but not last from this author. a fiver!

Having come across (steady now!) this tale because it was favourite by someone else, I was immediately drawn into it by the quality of the writing. In school, I was never an English language student who was worthy of that title but I think that it's most pleasing features are the lean yet entirely sufficient construction of the main characters. The story flows so easily and logically to it's peak and is all the more enjoyable because of the absence of conveniently placed strap-ons and double ended dildos. I am reminded of 'Brief Encounter' but with Sylvia Sims replacing Trevor Howard but while the prose evokes the 1940's this story and it's protagonists are timeless. I very much enjoyed it, thank you.