All Comments on 'Burning Issue'

Sorry for your loss! Good story.

5

FANTASTIC story!!!! Very exciting!! 5 stars!

Thanks so good, and so sorry for your loss

The love you give and got was written with love and kindness of both characters it showed that incest is not the worst thing in the world it could almost be the best

Sorry for your loss

Cute, fun, sexy, loving story. The Mom's initial push for nudity was a tiny bit odd, but the rest ... went well.

Five for you

Well done!

Loved it

Sorry for your loss! I will say this is one of the better stories I have read.

very good story.

hope you do maybe another chapter, maybe add old girlfriend or her boss to it??

It's an intimate story. Sorry for your loss.

I am glad that you have found writing again. Sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing the story

Very good loved it

As good as all your PREVIOUS STORIES

HOPE you decide to keep writing great stories!

Yes, losing someone dear may well lead to longing and perhaps regret in some cases.

Mine was, in retrospect, the one love I could never have... 55+ years of pining but still burning strong. When does the ache end?

I applaud you Sir, a masterpiece! If only...

Great story. A second chapter would be awesome where they decide to continue and maybe have a family with jenny and his mom.

Also, sorry for your loss

Great story, definitely with adding other chapters.

Very well written , good background to it , but mostly it was believable , no huge cock or tits that simply put , destroy a story for me , well done Sir will add you to my favorite list .

Horrible loss. My heart goes out to you.

Thank you for continuing your creative writing. If you can, please continue.

So sorry for your loss, great story

Absolutely brilliant, so intimate and sexy. It's great to have you back. I lost my wife this past February, after 50 years, and these stories have been keeping me company because I'm not ready to chase another woman yet. Your work is amazing and I, for one, welcome you back with great fanfare. I hope you find writing cathartic and keep going. My sympathies and empathy go out to you, bless you. Thanks for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍

Great story! Please keep writing. Sorry for your lose.

Nice! Had my John Thomas on the rise

“I’ve edited it down for size…”

Think you should edit it up…a couple of chapters or three…

Lovely story, and I'm so sorry about your wife. I hope each day gets a little easier for you.

Great story. Only note is that a pool, and the chlorine would be hell on a burn.

I'm sorry for your loss. You are a very talented writer and I hope that you can continue with this story. I have really enjoyed reading it.

Thank you

would love to know what happens when Betty stays for a couple of days

Looking forward to reading this tale but I just wanted to say I hope things do get better for you. That perhaps writing again will bring you some measure of happiness and closure to the loss you must feel. I can't imagine how that must hurt. Also, thanks for all you have shared with us readers.

Wonderful story. Incredibly heartwarming and intimate as well as very erotic. The only criticism would be the "banter". It seemed there was a lot of dialogue for very basic things but perhaps that is the style/relationship the author was going for. Great work as the intimate connection was very apparent throughout the story. 4.5/5

Beautiful. Simply beautiful

So sorry to hear about your wife. Loved this story, and would have liked more, hopefully leading to a baby and a new "best fuck" with a HEA. Thanks for this story, 5/5

Fabulous, a love that can only be shared by two people so much in love. A mom and son bought together to the ultimate sexual act that turns two into one......very well written too.

What a great come back. Sorry to hear about your wife. Now that you have started, please don't quit. I gave it 5 stars

To be honest, incest has never been my kink, but this was really good.

I love your style of writing; it was a nice slow burn and, in its way, quite romantic.

I think I might try to read a few more of your works, very nicely done.

This is one of the best stories I have read on Literotica. Great build up, spelling, word usage, punctuation all combined to make it a wonderful read. Plus the fact that it was sexy as hell. You will be only the second one that I sign up to follow. Looking forward to reading your other stories.

This is a tender, sensual love story between mutually consenting adults who happen to be mother and son. Thesetwomature adults are able to love each other withoutguild, shame, self-loathing nor self-recrimination. The sensual sensitivity to each others needs, wants, emotional, physical, and psychological desires are met without fear of rejection. The self-aware, self-confident, self-assured lovers realize that real can do nothing wrong. It has no boundaries. This one of the most romantic, intimate stories I have ever read on this site.

Beautiful concept. Beautifully written, paced and beyond plausable. As a young man I struggled with lust for my mum never realised. As an old man, now free of "Shoulds", I would have tried harder. H. Sydney, Australia

The English seem to have a knack of draing every littie bit of sexuality out of dialogue. It could have been wonderful, it wasn't.

Only one minor criticism.

It finished too soon. I was looking forward to more.