All Comments on 'Bus Ride with Sister'

I hope you continue. 5 stars

Loved it. Will it continue?

Definitely hoping for a part 2, and more.

Great story of sister and brother having fun.....

Hope for part 2

Very hot...got me hard and got me off!

Hope you don't plan to leave us hanging with this ending .I would love to read more of this story .Soon ! Maybe you could describe what they look like a little .Hope to see part two soon ..

Nice story. I really enjoyed it. and the texting with mom while sucking off brother was a nice twisted touch!

Definitely continue this one.

5*s

great story line very arousing ur mind can visualize everything u describe keep it up does sister hint to mother of what is happening

5 stars very good pace and writing. Loved the scene in the locker room where they got undressed. Please give us MORE !!!!!!

5 stars, keep it going please.

Awesome keep it going

Please continue this awesome story!

great story love to hear more

Great story, keep it going. Thanks

Great holiday.

Highly improbable, but such a wonderful idea, and highly arousing. More about this sexy trip, please. Maybe they'll find they aren't the only siblings - dad&daughter - mom&son, etc. on that bus.

C'mon HeyAll, there has to be more, right? What happens after this? Do they continue their activities throughout the trip?

These two were a lot of fun, thanks to your dialogue and the situation that kept pushing them closer and closer together - literally. A very interesting take on a brother and sister hooking up because they're naked in the same place at the same time. I think the opening would have been stronger if it had started with them being told it was a nudist trip and filled in the background of how they ended up posing as a couple on the trip with their dialogue as they debated staying on the trip or leaving and texting with Mom would have had more impact if he didn't realize who it was until she told him. All-in-all a fun romp and good use of the Nude Day theme.

It's to good to leave us hanging

That turned me on so much. I'm dripping wet and in need of a huge cock. Please continue this story

Hope part two comes quick so we can find out how the rest of the trip went. He he. Doug

Great story. Can't wait for part 2. Hopefully there is a part 2. Theres so much more they can do on this trip.

Excellent story with great promise for future episodes! Keep up the good work for all sister lovers!

WOW!

Amazing!!!

Loved it one of the best I have read here please complete more about the ride!

What happens when they get to the first stop on the bus tour? Ummm. . . .They find their room has only one bed? They go snorkeling in the nude, but not in the water? They have dinner in the nude, with dessert in their room? They discover that they love each other more than brother and sister? The possibilities here are endless. Keep going , hint, hint, hint.

This was a great story. Would've loved to see it be longer and go much further.

Very nice build up with this original erotic tale. Very engaging characters that came to life with all the proper detail and emotions laced throughout. The only issue with this brilliant Storyline is that it's so not finished... as the others mentioned. This is too good to leave it in such a unfinished state. It's a moral imperative to see what other mischief these sexy siblings end up getting into. The possibilities really are endless!

Very erotic and so HOT ...... yeah they both need to go further and get each other offer as much as they can while on the road trip. They can really have a great relationship after they get home. A hot n' hard one....... Thanks !!

Lot's of fun, and went with the theme

Loved her multi-tasking on the phone back to mom, cute touch ( the little bit of veracity that always engages)

Nice work

This could easily be a series of nudist adventures for them...hope to see more!

Well written and creative. I'd like to see another chapter!

My kind of story. I was completely turned on. There is a lot to work with here. Please take us further on this bus ride.

I am imagining what "activities" they will enjoy. Well done!

You have a great writing style, how about continuing with the events of the next few days.

Well done!

You should write some more about the rest of the trip

This is a perfect setup for more action with sis and then with mom. Don't let it die out.

Great story! Hope you continue their trip for us :)

great story. You should write some more about the rest of the trip

if you only write one more thing for the rest of your life, please let it be a continuation of this story, I love your writing style and this is one of the best stories I've ever read on Literotica.

He did well to not have an erection until she sat on his lap. I'd have got hard the moment she started undressing! Love it!!

Great read.

Awaiting part 2.

That was fabulous and so arousing. Please continue with the outdoor holiday - Ita ready made for part two

I had brother and sister neighbors in my teen years. They were similar to the siblings

in the story. They weren't bashful around me and played with one another openly.

I never got to touch the sister, but I still have those memories. It was in the 70's

when women were women, without shaving or heavy trimming.

Very titillating story. Please continue with their vacation trip.

More please

Definitely need to know more. What happened next? Please please please tell us more.

great story can't wait to read more!!

I think I would have sat her little hot box squarely on my hard dick for my return treat.... Except I would have done it riiiiight before she was about to cum... Pull out my two fingers, lift, drop, back to her clit! ;). ...then *she* could worry about leaking on the seat next to us, hehehe. ...oh, these panties Im wearing? Im just spotting a bit, it'll clear up! Lol.

Definitely, this story sounds like just the beginning. It's very well written, technically very good writing, even proficient punctuation. Great job.

Now, as to the week ahead? How do they share all those activities? Does Christine top him off every morning before they head out for other activities so he doesn't have to worry about becoming publicly erect, at least for the first couple hours?? Do they share a nice soft feather bed every evening? Sounds like Christine might enjoy being on top. Please give us at least 3 or 4 more episodes. Thanks very much.

What will these include? Freestyle muff diving? Couples tag team quoits on boners? Will they find another clandestine brother sister pair and couple up, trade off, invest in reciprocal relationships?

This is a magnificent opportunity to test your creativity skills as well as your writing ability. Best wishes.

I hope to see chapter two. My theory is that the sister planned all of this; I'd love to see how it comes out.

Amazingly written. I hope there is a sequel, and i rarely read sequels on this site.

Damn, this story makes me want to sit my own sister on my lap, with me deep inside her at the back of a bus, staring deeply into each others eyes as we fuck.. Please continue the story!

love the stories but they are to short

If there's a next chapter or story continuation, please let me know. This story was hot and exciting.

I love your stories, but I want more! Always left with room for another!

Please continue this adventure!

This was sexy as hell. Is there more to the story? I hope so! :) <3

Hope you have another chapter or more planned. Did she plan the trip with her brother?? Maybe..

Sounds like the best bus trip in the world - any plans for another chapter and they enjoy a union of siblings? You got a big 5 for this story.

Just gave a 5 star rating. Please write some more

Would love a second part!

You know .... there's a whole tour left. You could write about that. Just a thought.

Good story it was awesome can't wait to see part 2

Good story thank you

wow this got me so hard and i wished it was me

wish it lasted longer needed to be more JUICY

I really got so hard while reading.....

Hope you continue the story....getting hot & had me hard.

Being a nudist I found this story very exciting. I hope you write a second chapter.

would love a follow up, bring the mom in more!

Good job! I am sure a great time was had by both of them during the next 3 days.

it's great help to masturbate alone in the corner

Great

Got aroused, need a big cock to fuck me hard

Can anybody fuck me hard with big so big dick

Such a hot time, makes me wish I had a brother too!

But now I need a part two! One where they go forward with this incestuous vacation and progress to actual fucking!

Great short story! Keep them cumming!!

God I’m soaked reading this! I can’t seem to keep my hands out of my dripping pussy just imagining being fucked by a huge cock

Excellent. Tell us more

Helping family thru tight situations escalates smile for all o:)

Bus ride just started. It's a several hour ride and what happens at the end of the ride? AND, the vacation just started!! Keep going.

Would love to see how the rest of the trip went!

Thanks for sharing.

l love your stories. They are good but you always leave us hanging. Please give us more chapters.

Gee's you've only scratched the surface of this story. You need to tell us more. I mean the trip has "JUST" started. It's not nice to leave us hangin' like that. After the first time I sucked my brother's dick, I couldn't stand not havin' it in my mouth. As soon as I'd get home from school, I'd make a bee line to his room where he'd be waiting for me naked on his bed. It only took a few seconds for me to get my clothing off and get on my hands and knees between his legs and get my mouth on that lovely piece of meat. I have sucked his dick for over 50 yrs. now. I STILL suck it ever night while we watch TV. He's the best and only man I've ever been with. PLEASE! more of this story. There's just so many things that can happen with them.

Great first chapter! Would love to see you continue their exploits. Another great story as always!

Part 2 please?

Marvalous build up, please continue as a series...

Nudism not so much. Shaved pussy big turn off. Why do women want to look like a child?

Will you make a second part with them banging?

Wish you had a second chapter when they got to the Nudist Ranch.

Maybe a little more "ACTION" between brother and sister.

I love bus and car trip stories.

I'am not realy into brother and sister, but you make it fun...Thanks for read.

I really enjoyed this story. Please continue with these characters. This was really erotic.

I think that they should've had sex on the bus

I like this story. Every part of it was filled with anticipation.