All Comments on 'Business Trip Surprise'

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tkb2tkb2almost 14 years ago
He Does It Again!

Loved the story! Love all your stories! So Damn Hot!!! Keep 'em cumming!

oldwayneoldwayneover 12 years ago
Way hot!

I enjoyed the hell out of it. Five Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

OK premise.

Rushed. Sex happens too fast, too abruptly. Lacks details.

Did she REALLY have to be 42DD? Nope. Would have been more realistic with smaller. Couldhave used some description of them. And her nipples. Could have used some her playing with them to get him hotter.

Three stars.

nyteramblernyterambleralmost 2 years ago

Good story wish there was a bit more....thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

So did they get to wherever it was so important for them to get to that they needed to drive through a snowstorm?

Was the road clear the following day or were they stuck for longer?

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