by Moondrift
should be in 'romance', not 'novels and novellas'.
nice storyline, good backstory, work on the dialog
Very nice romance - quite a bit different, but a very nice and sometimes funny read. Actually in some states in the US (e.g. New York) it is legal to marry first cousins and people do so and have children with no adverse effects.
This story goes further in classification due to the reason that it is not just a Romance story but it is also an Incest/Taboo story due to the main characters being first cousins.
Not only a good story, but it made me laugh! Don't let the nit-pickers put you off! Unless you were a professional author and I'd bought your stories for £Zillions from Amazon, I wouldn't expect it to be perfect, at least it's in English and grammatically correct.
Keep up the good work!
Wonderful little story. It has a bit of whimsy which I find appealing.
Boyd
I really loved this little fantasy! You really did an outstanding job with it I did say OUTSTANDING, didn't I???
How about more on this story. Seems that there is room to add to an already GREAT story. Pretty please????
FULL OF HUMOUR AND I FEEL IT SHOULD HAVE DEVELOPED MORE TO INCLUDE ALL THE CHARACTERS AND THE BUILD UP OF THE BUSINESS......PLEASE ADD TO IT....
It is not true that they could not get married. Their mothers are sisters. In Australia, where this story takes place, first cousin marriages are legal.