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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
PERFECT

i love this story, its ur best work yet! Your writing is spellbinding.. all that talk of chocolate cake made me actually go out and get some haf way thru the story. Laxmy.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOover 12 years ago
She

deserves happiness as does Meera, his mother needs to let him live his life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What a wonderful twist...

... and I must admit I did not see it coming! For Rae to be Jay's sister! I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Excellent story line and such beautiful writing.

JR

LynnMckLynnMckabout 12 years ago
It Gets

interestinger and insterestinger (as Pooh would say :)

Yobo36Yobo36over 11 years ago
Sister?

Oh what tangled webs you weave. I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Addicted

I'm hooked onto every word so far!

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