All Comments on 'By the Bay Ch. 13'

Jay's behavior is reprehensible.

This is going to be a very interesting ride to the truth. I wonder who will be left standing. Looking forward to your update.

So happy you are back and with a great update at that. I really hope Jay listens to his heart and chooses wisely about what he really wants. I am kinda annoyed that he seems to be such a player. I mean I would be crushed if I heard that. I feel sorry for Anita. I hope you give her strength to help her go through this. Can't wait for the next update.

Regards.

that is history, i think the bug has bitten, and why do i think charlie and meera are going to be more than "friends" hope to see more soon

I didn't enjoy this chapter very much. Meera continues to act like a petulant child. I am tired of reading about her and think Anita would almost be better off without her. Jay is being ridiculous and should at least admit his feelings for Anita to himself. And Anita needs to live her life instead of being so worried about everyone else!

Gah! Hope the next ch is a bit better.

Love Meera, such a great character. Will she meet Rae, will she realize the truth? Will she spur Anita towards a new level of being, and a new understanding of life? Will Anita learn the truth about Meera? Oh Lily, this story rocks. Love it, love it, love it!

Thank you.