All Comments on 'C.E.O. Finds Her Homeless Brother'

This is a well written story! The characters are relatively believable, and the plot is simple, but well put together. This is a good read!

I thought it was an interesting idea for a story. It was a little brief for my taste, but I gave it a top score. Keep writing. I like what you have submitted lately.

You could do a sequal. Make a story about Tammy and Dory's children when they turn 18.

I love how the siblings found what they both wanted...a family.

Please keep up the good work!

Can't really think of what to say except its a 3 (3.5 if it could be) star story. Its got an interesting setup and like I stated already, its cute.

I loved this story. I love the when Dory and Tammy finally having sex.

hahahah wow she is such a cock slut im glad everything worked out for the best YAY!

Could only give 3 stars out of five for such a short story with little buildup.

I love it. Daddy/daughter sex is hot, but I LOVE brother/sister.your stories are hot as fuck

I love it. Daddy/daughter sex is hot, but I LOVE brother/sister. And the brother being uncut just makes it hotter - I love uncut dick

A very nice ending. Hope you continue this one. There are a lot of possibilities.

Thank you.

This was a great story with a very well done plot. The characters were all believable and the ending was nothing but sweet. Keep writing.

She couldn't have made getting her brother part of the after 18 fuck me deal

sissy was a whore. so a bum and a whore were a match made in hell...

I wish your sister could talk 2 mine an get her to care about me ike your sister cares about you

Sorry don't read those...

Well done short story. Keep writing, it was good.

I like the story alot. AAAAA++++

Cute fun fast story!

10/10!!!!!

So she's a slut who gave it to everyone and now wants to be a slut for her brother she just found? Meh

I've just got to say wow just wow this is technically my my second time reading this story though the first time I did not have an account

I love this story

That has fucked so many people that she has to go looking for the homeless to get some strange. Meh

This was robotic and lifeless. "Hello brother. Get in the car. Have wash. I'm rich. Fuck me."

"Hello sister. I have a big cock. How much money do you have. Fuck me."

Listless and loveless. As I said; meh.

Sister is way too much of a slut to be likeable.

Not a bad story but went by WAY too fast. I'd have loved some more backstory, showing Tammy searching for her brother (I'm not even sure if thats how she found him or if it was a coincidence) and some romance before straight to the sex. This story idea is excellent, missing homeless brother that the sister has been looking for after doing a lot of things she may not have wanted to do but learned to live with to survive and to eventually give her lost brother a good life too. Still a decent enough story, 4 stars.

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