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chilleywilleychilleywilleyabout 10 years ago
Good sweet story

Never heard of a cabbage tree, so that in the title was a grabber. Likewise the spiders. Foreign lands (to the US folks) have a special appeal particularly as story back ground, and I would have appreciated some more detail on it. Winter frog does this quite well.

I always wondered why when spanking a woman, it seems nobody reaches around under them and cups their mons, with fingers around the clit. Each slap could be echoed by a little erotic rub to the nub.

Chilley

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 4 years ago

Excellent story and entertaining. I was googling the cabbage trees and the various spiders, not being that plugged into the flora and fauna down under. Glad it all worked out, with Melanie free of pesky spiders, and quite sexually happy, too, in the final analysis. Good for you (assuming you're the narrator, Ashson). Five stars.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 3 years ago
Write one with Snakes (please)!

Tears for fears and fellatio.

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