All Comments on 'Cabin Fever'

by Swampcooler

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Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69over 4 years ago
Well Done!

What a great story about two lovers in love! Are there any more chapters? I sure hope so!

VegasloverVegasloverover 4 years ago

Absolutely fantastic! I loved how there wasn't the constant mention of race or use of derogatory names like in other books based in this time frame or location. It was relatable and heart felt. A feel good story from all angles. Thank you.

Cracker270Cracker270over 4 years ago

Boy did I enjoy reading that. You are very talented.

akindman22015akindman22015over 4 years ago
Bravo Zulu

Navy speak for well done Swampcooler!!

Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Add you to my Author and Story page.

Keep up the excellent writing..

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Wow, what a great story! Please keep writing.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 4 years ago
I sure hope

you write more on Bettina and Travis. You wove a very realistic and compelling story. I sure loved how they got to know each other, took some time to do it and then how she hooked up with him without her parent's approval--and Travis won them over by getting them out of that jam. Very plausible and seemingly quite original to me. Loved their chemistry and how you described their sex. A 5 hands down. :)

smiley666smiley666over 4 years ago

When I was looking through the different stories something told me that I have to read this story. Its not often that you feel like standing besides the actors and feel like them. Wonderful story where everything is like in normal live...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
super!!!

one of the best stories I've read here. Hope to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Nam '69. Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
FANTASTIC!

Def worth a few more chapters. This is one of the best or stories I've read in here. I, and others, look forward to ready more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome story

Absolutely awesome story! More chapters, please... Including the proposal and wedding.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great story,

This was great! I agree that a few more chapters need to be written. Great story line couldn't be better

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 4 years ago

Great story! Needs a follow up.

FirediamondFirediamondalmost 4 years ago
Marriage

I was expecting him to propose to her by the end.

Crusader235Crusader235over 3 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story, so glad he found his bliss. Wondering if there's another chapter coming? Five Stars!

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 3 years ago

Lovely story! Want to read more, especially about Travis and Bettina's babies!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Now this was a great story,I've read this before and it was just as good as the first time I read it,,,It does not matter

what colors you are,love does not judge,,,This should have been made in a novel as its great,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great romantic story! This also means the story can be part of Romance category.

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53over 2 years ago

What a wonderful read. I was touched when you added the dog to the "threesome" (LOL). It is a wonderfully written story that you can feel the emotions of all the characters. I was grateful that you didn't "oversize" the characters attributes. It is rare to see that. Thanks.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

Really enjoyable read, great characters and a perfect balance throughout

6King6Kingover 2 years ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

auhunter04auhunter04about 2 years ago

Dimes ---Well it was written about a different time.

Lord that we had such people and love today

lots of us all twisted up with self-importance and hate.

Doesn't do anybody any good

12bolt12boltalmost 2 years ago

Very enjoyable read thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story.Good imagination. Good story line. I really enjoyed it.

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Excellent story. Thought perhaps they'd marry but it's not important for the story. Obviously in love and other things will work out. 5 ⛤

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good writing.

Great story.

Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome story thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love it how about part 2 thank you

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Aww, shucks.

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