All Comments on 'Cabin Fever Ch. 02'

Can't believe you waited until the very end to bring them in.

I wanted to know between Lisa & Kevin, nice one! And now for p3.

I'm interested do post more please

As I was reading this, I kept thinking it was familiar. The end of this chapter clinched it. I did a little search, and, yep, you posted these two chapters on storiesonline a little over a year ago. But it was never ended. I hope this isn't just a reposting.

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While I can see the desire to have these become swapping relations, given what you've written and the way you wrote it (3rd person omniscient), I would think the most likely outcome is them breaking up. We know what the characters are thinking and feeling.

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Lisa & Kevin may have been planing to end it, but Wendy & Brad have expressed feelings of anger and hurt, feelings that would be expected to be fatal to a marriage.

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Also, have the four stay married but now practicing incest in the open is a little too easy & cliched.

Their wife and husband came in at the same time, what where they doing together?

They where doing the same thing, fucking and sucking. Foursome time.

Great ending

U didn't finish the story a year ago. Could u do it now? Please? Its really interesting

Are you going to have them admit to the 4 years of indelity as well as fucking on Brad and Lisa's wedding eve and night?

Nice!