All Comments on 'Cabin Fun'

marks because 1-A new plot, 2--No over sized dick, 3-No over sized boobs--Just good clean sibling fun--Who can ask for more

I love Marilyn's work and share her opinions of your story. I think the story could be expanded. You left that door open...so, give us the sequel.

Not the best story I've read but not bad. More character development would be good. I found Ashley acted immature for her age which made it creepy and of course the moment I read the first paragraph with the girl being 18 and the guy being 19 I rolled my eyes - this seems to be the norm in ALL brother/sister incest stories.

I wish I had a sister that would do things like that with me. I hope there is more to come with him taking his mother through the thicket.

That was amazing and the most creative way to have them hook up.

i came all over my bed

Sounds like an excellent lead in to more. Love it.

Nicely written. I look forward to more.

it not bad mate but wouldnt be a bad idea to use more descriptive and more convo while they have sex, just sayin

It was a great story and could be the beginnings of an amazing story arc please write more in this series!!

Short but fun!! Thanks :)

It was a good scenario, but i thought it was lacking in details and in the description of the sex. There is no build up, the characters just cum instantly a bunch of times.

ending. Just a thought, did the daughter/sister know something about the mother? Maybe the so could "find a tic" to justify the exam.

Would have been better if the inspection had been finished and left the siblings curious about each other before they actually did something about it. Maybe a bit more time wondering and working themselves up to it.

Searching for ticks is a good reason for exploring bodies but I doubt that the arousal would have come about so quickly.

3 stars is all I could rate although I wanted to rate this higher.