by Samuelx
A good short story that I assume is gonna become a series! I think you should stick to just they pronouns for Dee since it's easier to follow, at least for me.
Please quit writing this garbage. It has never been good.
You're on a few hundred of these at this point, and after a quick check of your story page your highest rated story is sitting at 3.61. Even a terrible writer would stumble accidentally into a good story or two after that many. My conclusion is you're doing this on purpose; writing godawful stories for your own jollies. And in this, you've been wildly successful. I tip my hat to you, keep getting your weird kicks mate.
SAMUEL X WRITES TALES ABOUT BLACKS
BUT THEY ALL ARE WRITTEN BY A MOTHERFUCKIN HACK
THEY AIN'T BELIEVABLE, THEY'RE STUPID AND CRASS!
SAMUEL OUGHTA TAKE 'EM ALL AND RAM 'EM UP HIS ASS!
Dee can't seem to figure out the difference between a trans man and a nonbinary person. It's also obnoxious as fuck that the narrator keeps saying "she/they" I thought maybe it was going to be a gradual change of him learning not to misgendering people. But I don't think YOU know not to misgender people.
The character was so racist and unlikeable I couldn’t read past the first 2 paragraphs. Maybe I missed the point of his being so harsh and judgemental but I prefer likable lead characters.