All Comments on 'Callie's Shadow Ch. 10'

Seriously!! This cannot be the end?!?! Really...all this awesome build up and you're going to dump a finish like that? I've been waiting and watching daily for your updates enjoying the hell out of this story only for it to end....please tell me you're really not abandoning it...

I enjoy your writing so much, but was left wanting for a better ending. How does Callie's family react? How did Angel and Marcus get into the situation at the end? Too many questions without an answer. Please continue the story.

RJ Jones

That was no ending. You don't end a story in an unfinished rush. To much left to do. That was a dreadful cop out. Shame on you! A cowardly finish.

Will never read another posting from you.

Too much to do that. I'm a firm believer in happy endings. So hang tight the rest is coming.

The last scene has to be a dream.

Tell me it's not true!

Something is missing. This is just a bad nightmare.

But then you said, this isn't the end. I am glad but confused

I want Dorians blood. I could continue with all the sadistic little things I'd like to do to him, in a timely fashion of my choosing. Maybe a week, if he lasted that long. It's early in the morning and you got my blood boiling. When he is ended, I want satisfaction!

The only reason I started reading this, is because you titled this chapter "The End". I never read unfinished stories.

That was mean.

I sincerely hope that last part was a dream, especially since it did not flow with the rest of the chapter. That can't be "the end".