All Comments on 'Callie's Shadow Ch. 15'

To rush the last three chapters did just not want to deal with it anymore?

It was practically a shout "The real end," and then it was kinda like, wow, really, that's it?

Loved the ending. Really well done. You could have been more descriptive in the final scene with Dorian, but I loved this. Please tell me there is a sequel?

This was so much better and answered the questions (mostly) that I asked. LOL

Thank You!

He took 5 min to burn into ash! I feel vindicated now and thank you for that!

Story was good but please don't try to add any funny bits in future, you suck at it. I enjoyed the read.

i truly enjoyed the entire story. Ofcourse a few spelling errors but no big deal, i forget how to spell words too. i agree with Ellie, maybe if you have time for a short sequel or follow up on the characters lives that would be awesome. i also have a question, what did shadow look like again? maybe I missed it and was reading too fast.

I had read this before when you had it posted previously. I enjoyed the reread and put you down as a favorite author.

You had 4 major characters and one was actually a war God!!!......seriously a wimpy war God....he got whipped by a vampire who in turn got taken out by a weaker vampire.....quite easily at that.......seriously stay away from action sequences.....none of it was any good.....it seemed like all it took to win the fight was to be a female.....powers didn't matter.