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prop69over 6 years agoToo short need more
At least Dad was getting some action.
David needs to play
Need a four some
xsiveoneover 6 years agoDisappointing!
The story, content, spelling and editing went down hill from the first chapter. I hate to down grade anyone's efforts as I couldn't do any better as a writer but I hope you improve with age and experience.
Anonymousover 6 years agoCamping !
Don't Stop now ! This chapter was a little short but you have so much more to cover .
Anonymousover 6 years agodont let this be the last one!
This series is great! Please keep writing about this family!
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