by HarryPerry
Poor dad , I know exactly how he feels . I wish my daughter had the same outlook as his , I would oblige her in a nanosecond . Keep them coming .
An incredible story. I do hope you intend to continue as it begs to be taken to a conclusion.
cant wait for the next chapter this is a very addictive read never want it to end it just gets better keep them cuming.
this I keep think about the daughter with the jaws theme playing in my mind... I kept thinking on how she is getting closer to "eating" daddy.
You should never urinate into a stream or river, always a few yards away. The ground will filter any nasties out before they get into the water system. Also imagine getting your water for a morning coffee out of the stream and someone is upstream a few yards peeing right into you kettle.
Otherwise well written and a good read
I thought for sure she was going to go in for a little lick just to see what it tasted like. It would be so awesome.