All Comments on 'Camping with Daughter Ch. 06'

This is what you call a family camping trip. I won't mine being part of that groupe.

Mom was a nice little surprise at the end.

please don't stop, keep them coming!

Thanks for a fun story. Your technical writing and storyline were both excellent. My one complaint was that, as far as I am concerned, the drama with Jennifer just went on too long. For me, instead of dragging the storyline out getting Jennifer laid, it would have been more interesting to bring the brother and twins more into the story, maybe even catch them in their own little family affair. Also, I thought that the addition of Mom was great.

Drawn out perfectly like foreplay and leaving on a sensual note to let the imagination run around. I look forward to what this family will be doing and what teachers will be shocked at, among other things, like drive thru escapades.

Pleeeeease do another soon!!!

Incest is not my thing at all but this is a most impressive story. Very well written and, like everyone else, I like the detail and the slow build towards the inevitable intercourse.

What particularly caught me, and it very strongly features in your other story 'Human Sexuality in College,' is the walking around naked in the forest fully erect for a long period of time accompanied by the girl. I find that idea appealing but is not a common feature of stories (or indeed videos).

It would have been good to have had interaction with the other campers and had Dan in a similar position resulting in activity with all three of the girls. I wonder why you seemed to drop Dan and his sisters from the story.

Hope you either continue this one or come up with another walking or running in the woods story.

Jen is a very confident nymphet, seducing her father. Not clear how Sally found the campsite - guess it was with text messaging.

As other have commented, the story could be extended with the other teens getting fully involved - maybe through flashbacks.

Maybe another series could be devoted to what Sally did for the five years while her husband was gone. She was certainly a nudist when he returned.

A very well-crafted series, if a little slow in the beginning.

I really liked the way you put this together. It wasn't filled with them fucking every other paragraph but it was so sexy in other ways. I wanted him to take her in the first story but the way you wrote it was so much better. Please let me know when you post more. hejo29445@yahoo.com

I've never read a better story than this in my whole entire life

Can't wait for more about this family.

I've always felt guilty about enjoying these taboo kinds of stories. After reading this i honestly feel like Jennifer changed my perspective on this. You're an amazing writer. Keep up the phenomenal work!

It was a well written and great details. I hope you will continue the story. I would love to read what happens with the twins and their brother as well as after they get home. So I hope you will continue with this story.

The tedious discussions between Jen and her Dad, are just that. Tedious. When the mom finally arrives and the three of them start to engage in what's actually pretty boring sex, they won't shut up. They keep babbling all through the sucking snd licking and (finally) fucking. This is hilariously implausible. Let them just shut up and enjoy their little orgy!

You have no sense of fictional space, plot, or character development. You have some talent but you should take a writing course and/or get someone to read and comment on your work before you submit it. Keep it up, but trim it down!

Jane in Seattle

Just cut out the 'analytical' discussions about right or wrong and so on. What is of value is the depiction of psychological relationships, and of nature as a context, well and sensually depicted. As a daughter-daddy-story it is one of the best.

I enjoyed all chapters very much. I consider it well written and it kept my interest. The attitude of Jen about interpersonal relations was refreshing. I want to read more. Thank you.

Excellent story. Can't wait for new story

You erec.............

I was totaly on bored until you grant iñ the mumma.The father and darghter were just about to climeax and then you have the mumma swim along and say SURPRISE BITCHES''''''''

This was a totolly unesaserry inclusions.

Should of made her have sex with park ranges and strange old campers.

You lost me and half of your favourite fann bass.

Not a happy!!!!! Buy now.

Okay first to those who question the choices made by the author your a bunch of idiots. To the author WELL DONE mate I hope there is a continuation of this and many more. Don'r let these fools who are only interested in the sex to dictate how you write, Please continue to share with us and thank you for being so sxpilicit and creative I cannot wait to read more, don't make me wait too long. Namaste brother

I thoroughly enjoyed this series. It left me wanting to read more and more. I love that you left a cliffhanger regarding the Twins and their brother. I would love to hear a continuation on that and explore where that will lead this family. I especially enjoyed the fact that the daughter was so free spirited with such confidence and a love for Cum. Please consider continuing this series.

Yep. I like your imagination however it is now 2015 and no update?

Not everyone enjoys the side stories but we did ! My wife, daughter and now grand daughter and I all enjoy being naked and being seen naked and pleasuring our selves as well as each other. We never hid our erections or masturbation sessions from our daughter and grand daughter and introduced and encouraged them to enjoy the pleasures of sex and participate as they grew up . Much of what you have written has been a way of life for us and we enjoy and appreciate your stories. -Bare469

Well e found out his daughter was fucking every one she eather would not let them in all the way or she had her hyman replaced. How many years has she been having sex with her mom or was she whoreing het mom out? I thing mom was fucking who ever daughter told her to. Dad needs to get all of them in to check for STD. When daughter said dad could play wity twins and when dad said he would not cheat on his wife, and she said she would not mind as long as he came home to them. This coment and her taking off to see her mom instead of spending at least the night with her husband. Was she going o meet another man or was she going to her moms.

I loved this series. I just wished the author hadn't teased about a new series with this family like that. Since it's been over six years since this last chapter (and his last submission overall), I don't think we'll be seeing that followup series. :-(

Congrats!

Whew! After seeing all those chapters and realizing the poor bastard doesn't get laid till the last chapter, I just skipped straight to the end! Hehehe;). A super long tease just kills me!! Well maybe now I can read from the beginning. Possibly ;)

Thanks for writing! The guy is (now;) one lucky bastard! ...um, twins? Woo!

Re the new series, I guess by a number of months, he means over 7 years!!

Fantastic story. Very erotic.

I just got through reading this story series. Great story!! Hopefully you will write more!!!

this story series is hands down absolutely the best story I have had the privilege to read on this website possibly the best erotic story I have ever read thank you so much I have very much enjoyed it and wait patiently for the next chapter in Jennifer and her parents wondrous lives

Really liked the story and would love to see more. But I really would rather it not involve other men in the future. Stick to the 3 of them, with liberal doses of exhibitionism, and maybe the occasional extra female character they could seduce and all play with together, maybe daughters friend from girl scouts. Just no sharing wife or daughter with other guys.

Great story got the precum dripping . Into the nature and naturism nice descriptions of the hiking areas.

Amazing!! Just discovered this series. I came so hard !

But grew up in the “old Conservative Dress Code environment “. WOW! Nicely done, well written. Gee, would it be great IF our world would rethink their ‘narrow minded opinions of themselves n others and enjoy Life better. Nudist Camps probably come closest to this Lifestyle. Mr. Perry.... please continue ! Thank you for the Journey.😊

Wish the series was continued as promised :(

Great series. The destination was well worth the trip.

great story loved it from beginning to end would love to see the future adventures of them

I thought they had hiked several miles from where they parked?

Did you forget all the new stories that you claimed to have ready for Posting?

I'm not sure if you've noticed, but it's been quite a while since you last Posted!

Overall, an absolute gem. A few minor quibbles that could be easily corrected with editing. However, there was one glaring error. It’s’Martial Arts, not Marshal Arts.

I read every story before commenting .

This is t e most awesome and joyful funny at points.

The love in this story is over whelming . I hated to stop

reading at anytime.

The sexuality was areal dream we all wish we could have.

Thank You for This story So Awesome