by Ashson
The story is a dud and wrecked even more by the author not knowing the commonly used slang for this type of story. If the author reads this GET A CLUE its "cum/cumming/came" for an orgasm or semen NOT "come/cummed/coming".
I don't suppose I'd be interested in displaying my illiteracy to the extent Anon1 does.
This is actually a neat piece of work.