All Comments on 'Can 25yo Widow be That Innocent?'

by Satsumabook123

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tonydxxtonydxxabout 1 month ago

The story starts with "This is a story of innocence being lost", which is the correct spelling. But elsewhere there is mention of "innocents lost" which is meaningless

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Is English your primary language?

Satsumabook123Satsumabook123about 1 month agoAuthor

Taking Anon's question seriously as it is not the first such comment my answer is;

As mentioned in my profile I am dyslexic (had to look up that spelling).

I am English therefore using terms used in England. Many are different to terms and expressions used in the US. I know this well as I have close American friends.

I write using a version of Word, which only allows American English not English English i.e favor not favour. This I find frustrating.

I do try and cut out the errors that I know I make and apologize for those that I miss e.g innocents lost.

It does seem a bit of a shame that the two comments received only dealt with spellings and language.

Highlander76Highlander76about 1 month ago

Delightful story… though there can't be many young women as innocent as Carla nowadays!

Five stars

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...