by Satsumabook123
The story starts with "This is a story of innocence being lost", which is the correct spelling. But elsewhere there is mention of "innocents lost" which is meaningless
Taking Anon's question seriously as it is not the first such comment my answer is;
As mentioned in my profile I am dyslexic (had to look up that spelling).
I am English therefore using terms used in England. Many are different to terms and expressions used in the US. I know this well as I have close American friends.
I write using a version of Word, which only allows American English not English English i.e favor not favour. This I find frustrating.
I do try and cut out the errors that I know I make and apologize for those that I miss e.g innocents lost.
It does seem a bit of a shame that the two comments received only dealt with spellings and language.
Delightful story… though there can't be many young women as innocent as Carla nowadays!
Five stars