All Comments on '"Can I Lick Your Pussy?" She Asked'

Love the buildup to lesbian sex with hetero sex. You had me from the start. Wonderful description of feelings. Quite possibly the best lesbian story I've read. I repeat - just great!

I thought you did a great job you mispelled one word the word load like lowd was the correct spelling and if you decide to write another chapter leave the guys out if your writing for the laesbian section add more women in your story next time maybe older married women.

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga

I thought you did a great job you mispelled one word the word load like lowd was the correct spelling and if you decide to write another chapter leave the guys out if your writing for the lesbian section add more women in your story next time maybe older married women.

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga

But you need to learn the difference between "peaked" -- you meant "peeked", and "loose" -- you meant "lose".

And with all the stating about how she loved lots of long, slop foreplay, it'd have been better with more of it -- especially breast play.

Bazzza:

Very well written story, marred by a few misspellings; changing 'tack' rather than 'tact'. Tack is 'direction' as in a sailboat - tact is diplomacy.

But a good story combining both MF and FF. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Rad'l

great story.....left me wanting more

your story was really good. i think it's great for all the ass holes to focus on all the small word mistakes in the story and forget about the amazing content. I'd like to see one you write a story this good.

holy shit that was awesome!!!!!!

i want to be a lesbian now after that!!!!!!!!!!!

could have used a little extra editing attention ... some missing words here and there ... but the story was great ... the sex even better ... except for Brett, of course!

Being a male myself..... I can really learn from this type of thing how a woman wants to be pleasured, and seeing as how I like giving more than recieving (spell check there), since I have a very thick skinned penis, I can really take alot from things like this. Also, I think that was very descriptive, and you did a great job, in the recounting of the story.

This story was just wonderful! I love being with other girls as we tend to know what it takes to really please a pussy. I hope curious women read this and find the courage to give it a try.

This story was well written, beautiful in every sense of the word and extremely HOT!!!!

Never been with another woman but have thought about it for years now, I REALLY want to for sure now!

that was HOT.. ive only tried oral with another female once..and i wish i would get myself in a situation like this one..maybe i should pick up smoking again.. :0)

I believe this to be something that needs to be experienced at least once, if not more, no matter in what direction one's life leads. Loved the glaring contrast between both hetero and lesbian sex. There really is no comparing the two.

That was brilliant.

I am a guy and am always looking for hints on how to properly use my toungue. It didn't hurt that the story was interesting too!!!

This was good; it is true that only another woman can bring my pussy to convulsions in a way no man can come close to due to knowing what really feels right. My best friend, Angela and I get together after work all the time and spend the night eating each other after getting real high on weed. It is always delish.......thanks, I love it!!! MaryJane,Ann Arbor, Michigan

Loved it. Been with both,But there is nothing like a womans touch.

Bobbielou

I was playing with my own pussy reading along, I felt I was right there with the 2 women. I have a female lover and the sex is fucking INCREDIBLE!

Being a writer myself, I first enjoyed this because of how well written and planned out it is. Secondly, I have always wanted to experience sexual love with another woman. For the most part, men don't really "get it" when it comes to oral sex. There have been very few in my past who could bring me to climax. I think another woman would know precisely how it's done!

Note to self: "shave". lol! ;) It's always great to read a story that has been thoughtfully written, so thank you for your efforts and contribution.

I really enjoyed the self-analysing voice - slightly clinical, in keeping with the nursey profession. And I got rather turned on by the sex, though I think there was a little bit too much of the Brett episode.

that was so fucking hot... i played with myself while reading this because i wanted to be there. I wanted to help you help her get to her orgasm. Shit i wanted to help her help you get your orgasm too!

Just long enough, and it was fucking arousing! It was one of the best stories i've read and you can believe i comed for that! Write more stories like that one! Cannot wait for the next oneee!

I liked it very much... I read this and made me smile...

loved the way you went into detail with every little movement!!

I absolutely love this story. It was so well written and thought out and put together. The sex was great and definately arousing. I think it was a great story and I love the way you told it. Looking back into your past and describing it from that moment.

This is absolutely fantastic. The dialogue between the characters is so incredibly witty and fun. The whole story was extremely charming in a very real and endearing way... and of course, it was very hot!

I loved it!

You have explained in good terms how a woman feel about a boy and how she chooses him. More bit of explanation in terms of your desires gives a good thrill to read all the three pages. Such a nice story to experience and enjoy in this late night. Thanks dear.

I thought this was wonderful. It was so well-described and it flowed really well.

I would just like to give some constructive criticism though: there were a few punctuation and grammar issues - not too distracting - but maybe another proofread would have made this even better.

That aside though, this is one of the best erotic stories I have ever read.

My heart was pounding after the 1st page...I was soaking wet after the 2nd...I was reaching for my vibrator after the 3rd!!! THANK YOUUU...you are a blessed writer!!! I loveeee your stories!!!

This was the best story I have read yet! I will have plenty of fun playing with my pussy right now!

The lesbian section was hot, but the rest was painful. I don't come to this section to read about hetero sex. I don't necessarily expect or desire a conversion story as I have no problem with bisexuality or people just exploring, but a warning at the beginning for those of us who identify as queer women would be a nice courtesy.

This story was good. I liked how it was longer then a lot are, so you get aroused more but at some points I just wanted sex to happen. But compared to a lot of other stories, this is probably one of the best ones I have read so far!

and enjoyed the reread. I was one of the 'assholes' that commented on the need for better proofreading and I'll repeat that comment. Good proofreading should be part of the pride in writing; you owe your readers a well written story not just stroke material. The characters were well drawn and believable. Thanks.

Yall r some freaks

I loved the story, now i'm wet and need some...... lol, thanks for the excitement.

I loved he damn story. So fucking amazing such a fucking turn on.

I jacked off like ten times while reading that now I'm gonna do it some more

best story every i couldn't stop jacking off.

dat was awsome, I cummed so hard when I read that. I wish I had a licking like that!

Girl I'd love to lick a pussy good and long like that and feel another womans body being pleasured by my tongue. Women are so amazing. :) I just fingered myself so much reading this too.

Got me so wet mmmm

I just jacked off In the darkness of my room.. This story was incredible.. Fuck pornos, stories are better:) definitely coming back to

Cumming back on this one I'm the future:) bravo:)

I loved it so much. It made me so wet.

LOved it!!! Made me sooooo horney, im even playing with myself right now!!!!!!! :)

Oh damn that turned me on so fucking much, being Bi myself! Well written story, and I liked how you explained every detail, the veins on Brett's big, hard dick, the little convulsions Ruth had with your tounge on her gyrating pussy. Damn, that got me wet ass fuck and ended up with me fingering myself.(:

I mean, you cant have childs with women. But i mostly think love is the escential of having sexual practices.

This strory should be mandatory for all men on so many levels.

I am a man and what I learned about cunnilingus from this story and being gentle during intercourse was amazing.

A truly great story and one that I shall cherish in years to come.

Awww man, that made me get wet and start playing with myself...it feels soooo goooood...

My pussy wet right now. I never thought reading would get me to drench my panties

My pussy is soooo wet right now.

What a great story about the sometime need of everyone to realize boundaries and always to be aware of our partner's needs. As previouly noted, I too learned a lot about the gentleness required in loving a good woman.

Im not as upset as maggie4 but I was disappointed that they ended up with men, it was a letdown. There are more than enough men in the world and more than enough stories where men end up with women. I was hoping this was a story was going to be woman positive, in a way it was, but it needed an ending where the girl gets the girl.

Super story! Very well written but could stand a little editing. Congratulations! More!

Pritty plees :)

Got me so fucking wet. Have my finger buried deep into my pussy. Mmmmm

Mmmm, turned me on!

I want my p*ssy licked badly!

Im in my bed with my sister in the next room! Im masterbating up a storm!

That made mmy pussy so wett I had to play with my clitt then get my vibrator turn it all the way up and fuckk myself til I came all ovrr ky bed . I want you to come lick my pussy like that

Mm I want my pussy licked now<3

My girlfriend reached her hands down my shorts when we got to the pussy licking part and started fingering me hard just because she was hot and horny but a whole bunch of other things happened after we finish reading.

I need to lick a pussy soon. Fuck, that made me so wet.

I've never been with a woman before but have dreamt of it many times! Right now I'm playing with my own clit wishing there was a pussy for me to lick and finger! More than anything I'd love to be ate out by a young beautiful lady and have her beg me to finger fuck her while eating her sweet pussy! I'm so horny right now and would love to have my tongue licking a hot wet pussy right now!! Fuck I'd love to have a 3 some with chics so one could be eating and fingering my wet pussy while I was able to enjoy pussy in my face too! Write more but leave out the cock!!

I have a crush on a popular girl in my class, Beth. I have had dreams of sex and marriage with her. When I come home from school I notice that my pussy is super wet like really crazy.

Great story and the ladies treated and told how it should be with them. Women are soft creatures and should be treated with tenderness, that method always wins, and gets you an encore every time. As a male I always use the soft approach and of course always shave first.

Well I'm a wife mother and grandmother! But I have been with a woman before!

Yes my husband nows! To tell you the truth I miss

Being with a woman! Their touch taste! If I had the

Chance to be with a woman again I would! I have a woman

Friend in my life right now that I would love to be with!

Just writing this is making my pussy so wet for her!

love the erotic story. I have always been a lesbian in my mind because I have not eaten pussy but love the act. someday maybe I might or it might remain just a fantacy. I love watching lesbian porn movies and pussy licking images

That was a good read. I like it when people write about their own personal sexual experiences. It brings something different to the table. I think you have a flair for writing about lesbian sex and would to see your write more girl-on-girl stuff.

If you ever need any ideas...I can always provide some from my dirty mind. :P

Why was this placed in the lesbian group? It fitted in the novella group. Firstly neither of the women were lesbian. And there was far to much hetero included in the story to be a proper lesbian story. Therefore I'm not scoring this piece.

Lesbian stories with a male involved. Oh, wait, if a male is involved then it isn't a Lesbian story. Wrong category

This wasnt lesbian. Bicurious if anything. A absolute joke for the lesbian section.

I thought it was great, nothing better than a women engaging it what makes her cum, man, woman or animal! You go girl, love it!

As a man it, is so hot to read a story about women having a wonderful sexual experience together. And this one did an excellent job making it so erotic rather than just bang,, bang and bye. Thank you ❤️

Wonderful story!

NOT a lesbian first time, NOT a lesbian oral, NOT a lesbian romance

So fucking male.

Where's the romance?? Where's "love"??

Sorry, may you should put that story in a different category. In this one, it was a turn down.

i did the same thing. my first taste got me to the other sex. still like receiving more, but love a real juicy puss. love to make them scream, stop stop enough

I GOT CAUGHT SNIFFING GIRLS DIRTY PANTIES

Wish I was part of that .