All Comments on 'Can't Lose Football Bet Pt. 03'

It is nice too see that someone can write a story with many chapters and not make you wait 2 months between chapters. Loved your story. Well told.

Loved it ....... Nice and seductive... Narration is simply exquisite !

...and they fucked her once,

and they fucked her twice,

and they fucked her once too often.

The mainspring in her asshole broke,and sent her to her coffin!

............................THE END..........................

Thanks for a great ride ..... Literarily not literally. This story makes me wish I had friends like this. Or you two!

You capture the erotic from male and female perspectives so well. Your bio explained a little why this might be.

Now I'm going to have to read the rest of your adventures. Wondering if they are they history or fiction keeps it fun !!