All Comments on 'Captured'

I fuckin love this story. Proceed.

Keep going

Can’t wait for chapter 2

Oh this is good! I hope you continue with it! You are an excellent writer and it has now made me interested in your other work which I’ll look at after I post this here.

Poor Sirah perhaps she was the ugly duckling with her stunted wings dance being alone. I agree with the prior two comments that would be nice to know more about her situation as she is taken into Thoran's dark cavern.

Lol I need more !

What's this about a 'palate cleanser`? It would be better to ingest a bottle of air freshener, than having you NOT prepare the whole course of dinner. There are some that haven't had their fill of fairy tales yet. Like meeeeeee!

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What's this about a 'palate cleanser`? I'd prefer to ingest a bottle of air freshener and have you create the full course meal. More njum-njums please. There

are some that haven't had their fill of fairy tales yet.

What's this about a 'palate cleanser`? Some of us are hungry here, pal. More njum-njums please. There are people that haven't had their fill of fairy tales yet. Yesssss, feeeeed ussss..

Just incredible, my favorite series on Lit.

Oh I like this. Your good.