All Comments on 'Captured by the Elves Ch. 11'

After how Kiari was converted, I wondered when she would speak with the goddess. Good work the inscrutable godliness portion, I rather enjoyed that. I agree that endings are difficult, no one is ever satisfied, it seems

I love thus story. I'd be happy reading a 10 page story update . though I'm happy to see the the story updates coming faster.

Thank you. I'm actually surprised that the chapter posted so soon. I thought that I was going to have to wait for a while. Endings are difficult. Sometimes I have the vision of how a story ends from the original idea stage, but it morphs as time goes on. Good to see that you're still around, LiterKnight.

Always excited to see another chapter

Ah! I came home to see this had been posted 11 minutes prior (yes, I check this site for updates on the story far too often! XD ), but I was far too tired to give it a proper read at the time. Having just finished it... wow! Another amazing chapter! I love how it started as a vague idea and setting with a lot of smut and is now just an absolutely brilliant world where the smut is an occasional little morsel amidst the rest of the wonderful story. The element of the story having a narrator who offers (often gloomy and cryptic!) commentary from a future that we haven't reached adds such a sense of dread, hope, and intensity to things for me. I cannot wait for the next chapter and yet I also am sad because it will bring us that much closer to the end of things. I don't want this world to end. I don't want these characters' stories to finish. It has been an absolute delight to read and to share with others. Thank you so, so much for all of the work you've done and keeping up communication through it all. I hope the heat breaks soon for you and that the drinks continue to flow smoothly!

Thank you for your patience, folks. I really appreciate it. Happy to report that Chapter 12 is nearly done and I will be submitting ASAP. Sorry that it took so long. Thanks again.

I just submitted Chapter 12. Let the good folks on the website work their magic. Thank you as always for your patience.

I wanted to join in with everyone else and say "Thank you" for a wonderful and gripping story. A number of times I had wonder where the storyline would go next. When Kiari was captured by the humans I was so worried she was going to a very dark and dreadful place. Very happy it didn't turn out that way. But that did mark a point in the story where things shifted from mental pain and manipulation to a physical ones. I guess you could say all before the point where Kiari was injured was pretty much the calm before the storm. Have some thoughts about some of the things that will happen but no idea how they will play out. I will just have to keep on reading and find out as they happen.

Once again you have achieved such a perfect blend of Sci FI and fantasy along with a great bit of hot sex added in. I’ve been hooked since I read the first chapter. Again I’m giving you a 25 star rating…. 🤤

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I can only join the applause. It is such an amacing story you have build up. And what an gripping endning for this one. I am going straight to the next chapter with shaking excitement. :D Its clear to see the amount of work that you have put into this storyline. I would love to buy a novel written by you (if its not already on the shelves??)