All Comments on 'Capturing Beauty'

Very good, nice story line with nothing nasty about it!

Great start. Looking forward to more.

It will get hot once her belly starts to grown again and those big milkers being full again!

Mmmmmmmm---very nice---waiting for more :)

All mothers and sons should experience such taboo sex. Reminiscent of my mother and myself except we started with a bath.

Woww… I like your choice of words, your storyline. I definitely enjoyed your mother/son-tale. Please continue. Can’t wait for more chapters…. Thanks for sharing.

Good start, hope to see more parts.

It needs to be edited, there are a lot of repeated sentences.

Good start.When she tells him to treat her like a woman,do it.No second guessing.Give her the greatest orgasm she's ever had.

I drew her huge breasts to perfection; wonderful descriptions

Pretty good start. Hot & caring. Bring on the next part. 5☆

Thank you! It was a nice start, even though there were repeated sentences. It did not detract from the story.

hoping for a continuation

For your first m/s story this was more than fine. Thank you, 5 stars coming your way.

Why use euphemisms? "manhood???" "seed???"

Brilliant story definitely need a follow on of it

Mmmm,,,,the perfect setup for a hot second story. You said, "and this was just the beginning." Please continue. 5 Stars