All Comments on 'Car Pooling Pt. 01'

I enjoyed your story. I love older women and young men stories.

You can't end it like that. What happens with Mark? That can’t be all you’ve got another month of carpooling.

Very entertaining story that made me think of my boyhood and the fantasy I had of seeing (or more) some of the older ladies or teachers naked. I look forward to the rest of your efforts to entertain and reminisce.

Thanks

Great story! I, too, love to read the stories of older women seducing young men. It brought back memories of when I was 15 yrs.old (1955) and lived in the country. Our closest neighbors, all sisters in their 30's, and never been married, were my fantasies.

One night the oldest sister invited me to the drive-in theater to see a movie. That was the night I lost my virginity. It was the best sex I ever had, and that was 63 years ago.

I quite enjoyed this story. 😀

Good little story but needs revision, the wording is very clinical in places and completely off in others. Also the internal dialogue isn't spoken it's stated which dragged me away from the scene.

Over all it's enjoyable but really needs tightening up.

This is terrible. Poorly written. Two stars and that's stretching it.

He needs to request she clear-cut the forest between her legs. I've never liked a hairy pussy. I'll see what happens in future chapters. I agree with a previous comment...the wording is a bit clinical and dry. Consider revising.

WOW! Very hot story!