All Comments on 'Car Pooling Pt. 08'

I like this series but this chapter was all over the map. Too short, jumping from topic to topic with no transition, and unless the questionnaire is material to later chapters it seems a needless topic. This chapter seemed a bit rushed.

The story is great, and as you realize, there are some "political" complications with her being nude in front of some, who's wife may care.

Still it needed to be a little better "jointed".

I do love it and look for it every morning to see where Martha is in it now.

Good plan to include the gardener in it to spice it up a little & no doubt you will include a few neighbors.

Maybe "down the road" you can have all the neighbor's wives be nude in the yard & neighborhood..

Make for super reading.

Thanks

Bob

What is up with intro of lawn guy? Will you follow up with a complete story?