by the Troubador
I just love the way you fill the space left by Softly. I wish that you or him could write a sequel
Those husbands must be so wimpy or there deaf or blind not to notice there wifes fucking those guys and if there not careful they could end up in jail for running a brothel inside a hotel without a permit .
I had read "Softly's" stories a long time ago but yours was a lot more fun and extremely witty.
Don F
No relationships will survive this and they will be prostitutes from now on.
The husbands are okay with this, although for monetary reasons. In Softly's story the wives only used sex to catch a husband, and once caught only rarely had sex with them. That is bound to change once the wives are properly indoctrinated. I see some happy husbands and wives in the future with maybe better marriages.
Great fill in for the missing chapter in Softly's original story. Idiots who commented negatively either didn't read the original or simply don't understand the difference between reality and fun fantasy fiction.
I agree with others that I'd like to see a sequel! Maybe and end of camp orgy with everyone involved. Or possibly a story where the players that don't make the cut get a memorable send-off.
Ever think of thinking out your stories before you start to write. Simply terrible,not really even a story. I am beginning to think a couple of your stories I read previously are flukes,they were actually good,but the last 3 I read stank. I simply will move on to another author,I can't handle anymore.