by dragonwriter
to see it end but that's life. Thanks for the ride.
The Eagle
" " Up
I am sorry to see it end. You did a great job and I am looking forward to your next tail.
Thanks
What happened with Chuck? Does he and Casey end up together?
What about the brother and sister who were also her friends did they ever get in on the sexy fun? Does Brice find out about Leah and her son? What about mom's best friend and her sister, what happened with them? What about Jenny's mom and dad did they get pulled into the incestuous lifestyle?
There are so many open questions left that a new story series starting 7 years later or starting with Lean & Brice's marriage could be very entertaining.
I was hoping that Casey, Jennifer and Jack would all live together. Brilliant story
Each and every chapter...a really great read...thank you for the passion...pleasure...characters and the fun!!!!!!!
I enjoyed this series, but the epilogue left me with a feeling of "huh?" What happened to Chuck? Was it an example of Casey's teenage infatuation wearing off, or did he decide to just move on, or what? You don't even mention Chuck in the epilogue. The ending is just unsettling, and leaves a few holes in the story.
I also want to point out something that has been bothering me in this and a few other stories, the use of ''mam'' instead of the proper spelling of "ma'am", which is the proper and polite shortening of "madam" or "madame". It should be: yes ma'am or no ma'am. Please keep that in mind in future stories, thank you.
1. A terrific story about a family that excelled in being decent and caring people. The respect for all of the characters woven into the telling was an additional high. Thanks.
2. The commentators who noticed that several of the characters had been omitted from the epilogue made good points. It would have been nice to tidy up all the "loose ends."
3. It also would have been nice if Brice has been told of, and had accepted, the intra-family relationships of Leah's family.
4. However, overall, it is a well written, erotic, engaging story about a group of very decent and loving people.
As others have stated "I sorry to see it end " . But alas I understand . As usual I gave 5stars to most of the chapters only a 4star to a couple , but that being said I really enjoyed it all .
Thanks
tx cracker
love it need to add one more ch. the family and friend get together
I love this story. It is great in every way. Love the ending. Love the people they seem so real. Tbanks
Great story, great characters, great plot, great ending.
Well worth more than 5 Stars.
Just a shame it had to end !
I loved it!! one of my favorites. Well written - great sex, good characters. You had a story with a plot, and a great ending. Something many writers on this site could learn. i hope you keep on writing. Great job. THANKS!!
This was a great story that had a really good theme. It had a beginning, middle, and end as all good stories should. (other writers on this site please take note).Thank you for a thoroughly enjoyable way to enjoy a few hours.
Just finished the story and was impressed with your style. Liked the characters and the pace. You are good at describing the scenes and it was like I was there. Thanks for your time and imagination.
Good series. Several possible subplots available for development. After the first 1 1/2 chapters, this story became enticing. I like your use of the English language. Little, if any, gutter slang. Overall, a 5 star series.
Loved the story. Will look for some more of your stuff as I really enjoyed it.
this is going to sound super weird but what happened to Chuck? I get it was Young Love but I liked the pairing of them. i really enjoyed more of the other stuff than the sex. sometimes these stories don't need as much sex as the author does such a great job with the characters and this is one of them.