All Comments on 'Cassie'

The story line was obvious, but you handled it so well who cares. It was fun, cute, sexy, and actually had a wee bit of a moral. Well done!!

This was a fun and sexy read. Happy ending too. My only complaint would be that I thought Cassie was a little hard on him about approaching Carrie. I think approaching an upset woman in a bar would make me too much of a player, trying to take advantage of her emotional vulnerability. I wouldn't feel right about it. OK, maybe some women would be looking for an emotional boost by talking with a nice guy. Maybe not. It's a very tricky situation.

First off thanks for reading, hope you liked it. For those who agree with jason about Cassie being too hard on Evan. I agree but that is just some job frusteration (why do they never make it easy on themselves), plus she didn't get her fix (true love is her rush remember) The way I see it both she and Carrie gave Evan the benefit of the doubt, in fact as a matchmaker she probably worked on Carrie first, getting her to leave the number. Then went to work on Evan, while getting a bit of fun for herself. Yes she took a few cheap shots at Evan, but probably gave him his true love for his trouble, so a fair trade I think.

Cassie thought he was a good catch why would she pass him off to Carrie or one of the other ladies in the bar and not keep him for herself

Your protagonist is a jerk.

Having read your Complex Relationship/Family stories first I can clearly see how you have developed your writing style. Seeing as how some might have missed the subtle hint about the bartender Cassie and why she didn't keep him to herself I felt I should direct attention to how she signed her note at the end.

C. Upidette

or if you put it together it spells Cupidette as in a female cupid. I rather like that subtle little part of this story as I think it adds to the magic. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for explaining the bleeding obvious.

Wonderful story. Reminds me a bit of me. We need to remember the old saying; 'Nothing ventured nothing gained'. Thanks very much. Gave it a '5'. Dan

One of the most ridiculous piles of shit I've ever read. Thank you sir, great job.

and the game was more important. TK U MLJ LV NV

been there done that . a country boy growing up in the city was rough growing up around young girls & ladies.

It was a nice story, wish you had followed up w Cassie. There was a lot more to the story if you allowed to continue. Think about the next chapter?