by MarshAlien
A fun tale with historical accuracy and plenty of heat! Different from your others Marsh and very good. Looking forward to more.
Such a good, satisfying story. Very accurate and very erotic...I loved every word of it...I loved Caroline and her family...
This is my most favorite part of all. Congratulations on finishing this epic. Very well done, indeed.
Brilliant on the story-telling, brilliant on the dialog and brilliant on fleshing out credible characterizations for all the principal players - Caroline, Lucy and Matthew especially. Especially brilliant in the sly humour and understated reserve with which many of the best ripostes were delivered. Quite!
it isnt very often that i actually laugh out loud at the dialogue on this website, nor is it very often that i comment but my god that was brilliant! just loved the quick witted nature of the whole thing with just the right balance of seriousness, drama and romance. thank you so much for lightening up my overly dull exam period.
CHEERS!
Thank you Swamp Stranger, it did indeed turn out to be a quite enjoyable and fulfilling read.
Lynn
It was fun interesting and lastly entertaining. Of course, references to actual historical happenings gave an added boost to an already great story. The author is extremely talented and demonstrated total control over his story. I rated a five only because that is the maximum. Thank you so much for sharing your talents.
I thoroughly enjoyed especially the last two sessions of this story. Caroline was a survivor and apparently a very beautiful woman who loved 3 men, with only the last, William surviving. Great ending!
I quite liked the story . the only issue I had was the overly fortuitous recovery of the Earl from what I assume was Acute Intermittent Porphyria. The timing was a little too coincidental.
Your stories are so good they don't need any sex scenes. Loved the courtroom antics. Keep writing great stories please.
MarshAlien hasn't written a story since 2008, I think. It's unlikely they're reading comments anymore.
Outstanding; as good as Patrick O'Brian's Aubrey-Maturin Series. Or any of the Alexander Kent Bolitho novels.
"Apparently my participation was not needed," he said with a shake of his head" 😳
- pal
..... written so well by a great writer. The author has not written at least on this site since 2008 -- much to readers dismay. If you are still with us MarshAlien, thank you for this and your other great reads. Your talent is missed.
I fully agree that you are sorely missed. My good man, you help put the 'literature' in Literotica. I might not have voted on every part of this, but as a whole, 5 stars.
Now they all realize who's really the boss and wears the pants in the family.
Viva Caroline and the lovely woman like her and memory of my wife who riled my life and I am thankful for it! Loved the story, keep writing.
Such a great story. Sadly it appears as though we will never see the further adventures of Caroline. Really worth a read this is one of the best on Literotica. BardnotBard