All Comments on 'Casual Friday'

by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Give you credit for being prolific

Not good, but you keep on trying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice

You are prolific, and always a quick, enjoyable read.

BiotechGirlBiotechGirlover 8 years ago
So many ideas!

I'm amazed at how many ideas you have for stories. I have read so many of your stories and when I check back to see what is "new", "recommended for me", or "recently popular", you always have another treat ready for me. Thank you for all of the entertainment! I'd be mighty bored without you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too narrative

Hey you, make it sensual. Don't make her overthink too much, she isn't in the observing perspective, she's involved big time.

But still - story was nice, I liked it.

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