by Stephen7Redo
Where did that love come from? If you want a twist, don't let it come from thin air. It needed to be established even a little.
from a lady's perspective the ending was a nice touch, not my personal preference, but sweet none the less
I loved it! Everything a story needs:
Non consent and teasing, and of course romance
I really thought you were going to be locked in Chastity, not your product some one else's. However the ladies did use your product to give you what you deseved