All Comments on 'Cat Fight Ch. 01'

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FieroGT1988 over 6 years ago

Here You Go Again

Another wide open concept story. Hooked already.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

What the f**k

You start a multi part story then publish 51 chapters (the lost empire) and then just stop it abruptly, I am definitely not wasting my time reading another.

UltimateHomeBody over 6 years ago

I feel that you left out explanations and descriptions. Will keep reading hoping you took the time to write ore than isolated events.

Anonymousabout 6 years ago

Just found this story

Chapter ending a little simplistic and both too brief and absolute

A coupe is a more complex affair worthy of several chapters

djb not a few lines

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

Huh?

I repeat, HUH? 🤔😩

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

What the fuck was that

But seriously what the fuck?

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Kitty Litter box content

It made me laugh how messed up it is. It's like you was on a lot of caffeine at time of writing.🙀

dinaniripped almost 3 years ago

Huh?

Anonymousover 1 year ago

This chapter is poorly written.

chytown 11 months ago

***Was that Sci Fi ????? Thanks for the read.

AnotherChapter 8 months ago

Why is this not in sci-fi? What drugs were you on when you wrote this? Curious…

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