All Comments on 'Cat Fight Ch. 10: Duel'

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UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 6 years ago
Really enjoying the tail (lol)

It just seems you jump to the result action or comment, and forget the build up to it that explains it. The writing should be at least twice as much to fill in these gaps in descriptions.

chytownchytown11 months ago

*****Honor and attitudes seems like the different clans have a lot of them. Thanks for sharing.

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