All Comments on 'Catalyst Pt. 01'

Great story. 5 stars. I always love sniffing dirty panties and inhaling the musky, pungent pussy smell on the crotch. Although I’m more of a string bikini panties than a thong.

I’m sure Jenna and her mom would end up having sex. Hopefully at the end the whole family would get involved.

Yon definition of Catalyst is a wee bit lacking. We're it complete your title would be less compelling. If you add 10gm of catalyst to a mixture you get a new mixture plus 10 gm of catalyst.

Great Story. Cant wait for family vacation. Please continue.

Really liked the beginning or first part of the story. Characters are well presented and the context well explained. It is also well written and quite erotic in description. Especially the scene in the living room, Jenna with her mom and dad, all three communicating sexually. Without saying anything and just looking at each other, their sexual desire was dictating their actions. The only thing that was missing (from my point of view) is maybe some words about how Jenna and her dad Rich started to get involved sexually. Lovely style of writing and can't wait to read how things will evolve within the family. Voted 5 stars !

I'll be waiting for next part--Great story!!

Fucked up on so many levels but that’s my world view. Unrated.

What??? She saw them multiple times fucking and NEVER found time to confront either him or her. What a load of bullshit. Any normal person, even one as fucked up as the wife would’ve exploded over this, that’s the truth. Even if they made up later and then accepted the incest, that first outrage would’ve happened. That one touch of unreality has ruined the start. Let’s hope the next chapter is more in touch with reality.

3/5

Very nice story although I'm not much into father and daughter incest will see what happens in next chapter gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!

After she first found out and mentioned to her husband, neither he or daughter bothered to communicate with her and kept sneaking around. This massive disrespect when it felt like the story was angling at a family loving each other jarred me out of immersion and couldn't get back into it.

Wow fantastic

Amazing start to the series. Thank you!

Beautiful, I can’t wait for more 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟