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All Comments on 'Catching the Eye of a Mob Boss Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Just found this story. It’s excellent. Love the way Jade is making Diego feel.. and think!

geemeedeegeemeedeealmost 6 years ago

I think a little time spent in Jace’s head would’ve been useful. Also, how could his clothes have been dry cleaned when they were cut off his body? And Diego must have the lightest touch or Jace the deepest sleeper for the handcuffs to have been removed without Jace noticing. (I’m detail-oriented.)

Her11Her11almost 6 years agoAuthor
To geemeedee

I love that you are detail oriented. I am too. Thats why Diego got Jace a NEW set of clothes and yes I think Jace woud be a very deep sleeper after the night he experienced, otherwise I think he would have woken up when Diego got up himself. Thanks for helping me keep my details straight!

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