All Comments on 'Catching Tom'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hot !!

That was a hot story. I hope there is more as he takes Shelby's cherry and hopefully shares her with his mom! Keep up the good work.

sacksackover 19 years ago
simple, satisfying stroke story

A sequel at some point?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Oh, Mr Darcey!

LOL

Fucked up characters, but nice narrative.

sherlock40sherlock40over 19 years ago
Very nice story

Hopefully we can read a sequel of all of them together. That would be hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hats off to you!!

That was some of the best work I have seen here. Every paragraph had me stiffer and stiffer and just a little closer to the edge.

THANKS!!!

blazervbblazervbover 19 years ago
Not bad

The only thing that is hard to get into is how this girl that's never even had her tits played with all of the sudden talks in staunch detail about sex and body parts. It still definitely got me going. Keep writing.

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