All Comments on 'Catherine & Thomas'

by hot_honey

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Miss_GothikaMiss_Gothikaover 14 years ago
Fab

What a wonderful story of love, as well as passion. Very enjoyable.

beachbum1958beachbum1958over 10 years ago
Very well written!

Great grammar, pacing and build-up; a very enjoyable and well written story, 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Excellent story, and I agree, terrific grammar and writing skill! ...and finally a writer on here that just doesn't jump in and say that anal sex is all easy and painless and good. I think so many writers here give people that have never had anal sex false expectations and they will either have a big surprise coming when they try, or wind up hurting someone. :/

...a nice, clean ending that left the story in s comfortable place without having to write in a moving in together (or other type of) ending.

Thanks and will look forward to more stuff!

lycanthrope7lycanthrope7over 4 years ago
Wow!

Absolutely loved the story, as well as the honesty and emotion between the siblings. You wrote what is possibly the best sex scene I've read in a long time, and you did it all without butchering the English language. Brilliant work, 5 stars.

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