by Just Plain Bob
Okay, what did you do with the real Just Plain Bob ?
This is radically different from the usual spineless husband genre and is surprisingly good.
100 % vote
This is one great read, it is just so wonderfully thought up and portrayed. This has to be one of your very best. It is so original and captivating.
Thank you for the great entertainment.
PT
A very good story with a diverse angle. Keep up the good work.
The people that populate your stories seem to be at about the level of those on the Jerry Springer show. The plot lines are silly and make no sense.
as many negative, even hostile and threatening, comments on their stories as you do, JPB.
And you ignore them and keep on producing stories that we read with pleasure and enjoyment (some more than others, but that's true of everybody's work). This one I thought was particularly fun.
So my hat is off to you! Keep on writin' 'em, and we'll keep on readin' 'em!
ohio
I think this is one of the most interesting stories that I've seen JPB write. Definitely thought provoking. Fantastic job!
What's up with that? Okay, so the plot's improbable. The tale is still an enjoyable read.
Great imagination, well written and immensely readable, I had a feeling that that there was a touch of incestuous attraction going on in the background but you gave me pause for doubt after the blowjob. All your characters were sympathetic and the ending quite apt.
I read from other commentators that you are quite a controversial author so I look forward to reading more of your work. Many thanks for your time, effort and sharing.
Great imagination, well written and immensely readable, I had a feeling that that there was a touch of incestuous attraction going on in the background but you gave me pause for doubt after the blowjob. All your characters were sympathetic and the ending quite apt.
I read from other commentators that you are quite a controversial author so I look forward to reading more of your work. Many thanks for your time, effort and sharing.
Great imagination, well written and immensely readable, I had a feeling that that there was a touch of incestuous attraction going on in the background but you gave me pause for doubt after the blowjob. All your characters were sympathetic and the ending quite apt.
I read from other commentators that you are quite a controversial author so I look forward to reading more of your work. Many thanks for your time, effort and sharing.
i think you good . Would to know if Cathy and Rob get togather or not THANK YOU
He was right. He's going to have a problem for years to come. Definitely time to look for another job. Maybe time to MOVE far, far away and look for another job. That way he won't have to worry about family events. Stay away for years. His sister? EEEEwwww.
Would like a sequel where the sister is invited into their bed repeatedly
Thought this was so far fetched as to maybe be farcical. Then came to Glorias's explanation and decided, hey, maybe OK for fiction site. Anyway a run-of-the-.mill realistic story might be boring and this was the opposite of boring.
Raised my opinion of JPB.
5 stars.
Paul in Oklahoma