All Comments on 'Caught!'

I loved your story, not just for the sexual content but also for the writing ability. I've experienced a conceptually similar experience to the one of the girl in your story, and her thoughts and feelings were fully authentic. I was shocked when I checked your bio and found it to be written by a male. It captured the female experience so completely I was certain it had to be written by a female author. You clearly are a talented and a gifted writer. I think you could easily do things more mainstream and gain a following quickly. You’ve got skill that rivals Victoria Holt and Catherine Coulter. Bravo!

The girl grows up overnight except for the wanting to put herself into another porn video. That so smacks of total immaturity. Why is it young girls like to leave a wide trail that tells their story in later years?

i havent read a story this good in a while.

This has me soaking wet! Thank you, it is awesome, but does it really have to end here? I think this is at least a three-parter if not a mini series. Would certainly work for me, and from what I'm reading, a few others! So waddya say?

That was a great story, I want to hear much more. Keep writing.

PLEASE go on don't leave it there I loved it!!!!!

C'mon and finish the story. It's really good.

Ah yes, there is nothing like a story about a boy and his dog...Got to me James...A real tear "jerk-her"...

Hope you do sme more it was great reading

I'd love to see a second installment of this story, if you're so inclined! You've successfully combined two of my favorite kinks, and done so in a remarkably naughty and fun way. Bravo! :)

this is an outstanding story. Ireally like the dog collar and leash. IN the next chapter she could be trained as a nice bitch for her owner.

This is my fantasy in print! Well done!

this is good cant wait to see what happens next

omg what a great story. well written. hot. extremely descriptive. can't wait to read your other stuff.

second chapter please

Please may I have some more!

Love it want more.

I love this story and there has to be a second part, so why keep us waiting