All Comments on 'Caught by Flatmate'

If you don't, very few people will enjoy your writing.

Perhaps you should request assistance here. There are many in the resource center who would help with the English grammar so the story translated better. I suggest this because I really like the way you unfold the story. So take your time and get help. You have an imagination and a voice that is worth hearing. you just need help to translate that to an English if you are writing for an English language audience. Keep at it please!

Well done Aarman, a fantastic. Really gives an idea of personality and the psychology of the characters. Can’t wait for more - your English will get better, but it’s great as it is. Maybe slow down your writing a bit.

Thanks for your comment, I really appreciate it. I already posted two other stories, continuing of the current one.

It's cool to understand english is not your first language.

the plot wasn't too bad. but god i hope english is a second language to you, because it was really hard to read..

https://literotica.com/s/caught-by-flatmate-ch-02-further-control