All Comments on 'Caught by Kelly's Mom Pt. 01'

Your stories contain excellent plots and potential for further development . I would suggest you describe the physical features of the characters in detail as the mental imagery is so important for readers . The details matter so much as to the arousal level of any story . Also the reluctance and second guessing ( Guilt level ) that can occur but is over come by the arousal level . For example the mother in this story could observe these two in bed fucking hard and moaning and begging and she can both be outraged but extremely turned on , at the same time . And stories can be much longer , over several chapters the tension can build as the attraction grows between the mother and daughter’s boyfriend . Detailed descriptions of sex are wonderful . The more details the better . If well written !