All Comments on 'Caught by the Caretaker'

Silly story concept... hmmm... let me see, you allow someone to commit a felony to avoid a misdemeanor... yeah, makes sense to me. And by the way, you don't just get to call the cops and say 'this person was breaking the law', you need proof. Any normal person would have just laughed at the guy.

Also, when you had the wife blurt out the "going away for six months" line, you let your reader know you were just too lazy to work the info into the story in a believable way.

Even ignoring the fact that no woman with the assertive character you describe would let herself be degraded in this manner, what happened to the husband? One second he's watching from the sidelines, the next he's vanished, just as his alleged best friend is fucking his wife. Did he storm off to get revenge by fucking his friend's own wife? Or did you forget he was still in the room? Sloppy.

Brilliant. The dirty old caretaker spanking the big guy's wife right in front of him. Man, this was good. More, please!

i really enjoyed this story, for me it would have been better if the wife was caught smoking alone. I understand this is your fantasy though.

If I was Greg, though, I probably would've drawn the line when he reached for the fanbelt. He'd already let the old guy see his wife's tits and spank her. That should suffice for his transgression.

What a bunch of crap!!!

Wife's bitchin and complaining was just not sexy. Could have developed into something.