by evanslily
I understand you have another life (lol) but please kinda hurry with the next chapter, i was so excited to see and read this one and loved it!!!!!!!!!
in your story. I am enjoying it a great deal. Like your other readers, I appreciate all the time, energy and talent you have put into entertaining us.
Okay - first things first --- I'm so glad she gave Daniel the heave ho, once and for all. After all that happened, I still think he had another girl on the string as well, and wanted to have his cake and eat it too.
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Aww, Luke - finding out about Rebecca's mom and purposely being the one to operate on her. How can you not love this guy? <br><br>
About Chloe - I have a feeling that she's just as bad as Daniel.
Another wonderful chapter in the saga of Becca and Luke. I hope we don't have to wait too long to find out what really happened between Luke and Chloe.
And why the hell hasn't Becca admitted she loves him yet?
ahhh! i was waiting for days for this one to come out. not to rush you but please hurry with the next
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to find an author that allows their characters to resolve their problems by talking with one another and doesn't drag out the conflict chapter after chapter. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. Oh, and I'm extremely satisfied that Rebecca gave Daniel the boot. Cheating and physical/mental abuse are two unforgivable sins in a relationship (just my opinion.) Daniel didn't deserve a second chance. He hardly seemed worth the first one she gave him...More, please? --ny
I am glad that she has taken the bit between her teeth and got rid of the twit. Oh well. And remember, a long wait is NOT a good wait. John B.
This is a very enjoyable story to be reading. I love all the characters. . . well, not Daniel. Gotta really love Luke though.
I totally loved this! I do! I want more!!!!!
Well, ok, as a student, I know how shitty deadlines and exams can be. However, please - post the next one asap! See? Another deadline ;)
Love it! This is a great story! its a good thing that Daniel is out of her life she doesn't need him! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks
lovely chapter as always.... as someone said worth the wait.. just please please try to make it as fast as u can..
Oh this is getting so good! I've enjoyed every chapter. It going to be painful waiting to find out what happens next. Good luck on your exams but please hurry with ch. 8, pretty please! =)
You obviously have talent! I hope these exams you're studying for allow you to show off your creative side. Good luck!
I admit that I have been checking every day (and sometimes more than that, if I'm honest) for the latest installment in the Becks & Luke saga, and you didn't disappoint! The characters and plot twists and turns are really done exceptionally well; if you haven't already, perhaps you should consider a career in writing. Finally, I'll echo the sentiment that I really really really hope it won't be too long before the next chapter arrives! (Darned exams!)
The fabric you weave is flawless, with, I feel, a depth of emotional understanding (for the goodies, that is!) that floats the reader through the skein right up to the bump of reality that is the voting!
Good Luck with your exams!
but I have to admit, just like the other person, I have been checking everyday just to see if you have posted another chapter. It has gotten to a point where you are in my bookmark. I know, I'm sad, but I really love this story. It has really trapped me and I am always thinking what could possibly happen next between Luke and Becks. Well, I'll be waiting. Thanks sharing your imagination with us!
I loved this!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I was getting annoyed with the main character, but she really redeemed herself in this chapter, and it helped understand a lot of her past decisions. Yay!!
I love the way you didn't drag out Luke and Becks getting back together. What did Daniel do to Luke? Chloe is a liar! Chapter 8 please.......
you are killing me!! lol Very, very well written! had me on the edge of my seat
Great so far, but please finish! I would love to read the rest... When you finish it. Good characters,too.
OMG I love this story and I think I'm in love with Luke!! What a guy!! Please hurry with the next chapters! This story is fantastic! Terrific writing!
I see you're writing again! It'd be great if you'd finish this story! :-)
My this is a good story. I love LUke.
I wish guys are this sweet and sensitive. :)
Keep up the good work. YOu are a good writer.
Now I'm really caught up in this story. There are so many subplot going on in the story. What happened between Luke and Chloe? What did Daniel and his friends do to Luke? What secrets does Luke have? What will happen to Rebecca's mum? Sorry, I can't spend much time writing more comments here--I have to read the next chapter.
this story is so beautiful. :') <3
i can't believe he heard her! :O i'd have died of embarrassment. |:!
It is unlikely u will be reading this unless U'r a serious Lily fan but a strange mark of the quality and appeal is that a none erotic Ch has 27,500 opens where earlier Chapters were closer to 20,000!
I know I've gushed about your other story already, but let me embarrass myself again by being as inarticulate as to merely say WOW! Gripping romantic story. Write more please.
When I read the part where Daniel accusingly said "You!" I had thought they must have met at the hotel where Rebecca was staying. But the Chloe twist was something. Total head-spinner.
are worthy of the surgeon Foster himself.
The plot construction here is so deft---the stitches turn up early in the story as Luke's profession is revealed, again as the plot progresses and then...well, that would be getting ahead of the story.
An exquisite piece of work.
I stumbled across this gem via highest score. I am so grateful. I hope you've published a story in book form or plan to...your talent shouldn't be kept secret. Thank you for the entertainment. Kudos.
i'm re-reading your story a third time. and i think i'll be back again another time whenever i feel the need to feel all warm and tingly and in love. great job :)
Yup I agree...I love this story. We don't need the sex. Ha ha
....unbelievable coincidences. England has literally thousands of hospitals...nuff said?
agree with anon. I get it's a story and unbelievable shit happens in stories but I mean there comes a time when it's just too unbelievable.
Rapport; the opposite of cognitive dissonance.
Another of your plot devices which is none too common in social circles. It leads to ending each other's sentences as well as hopefully indicating
the existence of 'soul-mates'.
(Heart on a sleeve syndrome?)