All Comments on 'Caught by the Tide Ch. 07'

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lillipslillipsover 16 years ago
Hurry

I understand you have another life (lol) but please kinda hurry with the next chapter, i was so excited to see and read this one and loved it!!!!!!!!!

cageyteecageyteeover 16 years ago
Wow! I can't believe I'm so caught up

in your story. I am enjoying it a great deal. Like your other readers, I appreciate all the time, energy and talent you have put into entertaining us.

bruce22bruce22over 16 years ago
Fine Story

Hope that your exams went well. The story is enthralling!

NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
So happy to see this update!

Okay - first things first --- I'm so glad she gave Daniel the heave ho, once and for all. After all that happened, I still think he had another girl on the string as well, and wanted to have his cake and eat it too.

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Aww, Luke - finding out about Rebecca's mom and purposely being the one to operate on her. How can you not love this guy? <br><br>

About Chloe - I have a feeling that she's just as bad as Daniel.

michchick98michchick98over 16 years ago
Excellent!

Another wonderful chapter in the saga of Becca and Luke. I hope we don't have to wait too long to find out what really happened between Luke and Chloe.

And why the hell hasn't Becca admitted she loves him yet?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
gold

ahhh! i was waiting for days for this one to come out. not to rush you but please hurry with the next

:D

NyasiaNyasiaover 16 years ago
Very refreshing...

to find an author that allows their characters to resolve their problems by talking with one another and doesn't drag out the conflict chapter after chapter. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. Oh, and I'm extremely satisfied that Rebecca gave Daniel the boot. Cheating and physical/mental abuse are two unforgivable sins in a relationship (just my opinion.) Daniel didn't deserve a second chance. He hardly seemed worth the first one she gave him...More, please? --ny

sharonasharonaover 16 years ago
LOVED IT!

Excellent! Can't wait for the rest!

john57john57over 16 years ago
A longer wait ?

I am glad that she has taken the bit between her teeth and got rid of the twit. Oh well. And remember, a long wait is NOT a good wait. John B.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hurry

Waiting with baited breath.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 16 years ago
Amazing!

That was such a good chapter I can't wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I sooo love this story

Love it! Love it! Can't wait for the next update.

Blueheart0Blueheart0over 16 years ago
Excellant!

This is a very enjoyable story to be reading. I love all the characters. . . well, not Daniel. Gotta really love Luke though.

Billydee2Billydee2over 16 years ago
Love The Story

Hate the wait but its always worth it

Kamikaze_KittyKamikaze_Kittyover 16 years ago
You rock!!!!

I totally loved this! I do! I want more!!!!!

Well, ok, as a student, I know how shitty deadlines and exams can be. However, please - post the next one asap! See? Another deadline ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love it!

Love it! This is a great story! its a good thing that Daniel is out of her life she doesn't need him! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

bevybeautybevybeautyover 16 years ago
great story

lovely chapter as always.... as someone said worth the wait.. just please please try to make it as fast as u can..

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wonderful!

Oh this is getting so good! I've enjoyed every chapter. It going to be painful waiting to find out what happens next. Good luck on your exams but please hurry with ch. 8, pretty please! =)

HikergirlHikergirlover 16 years ago
Great character development!

You obviously have talent! I hope these exams you're studying for allow you to show off your creative side. Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Brava!

I admit that I have been checking every day (and sometimes more than that, if I'm honest) for the latest installment in the Becks & Luke saga, and you didn't disappoint! The characters and plot twists and turns are really done exceptionally well; if you haven't already, perhaps you should consider a career in writing. Finally, I'll echo the sentiment that I really really really hope it won't be too long before the next chapter arrives! (Darned exams!)

Roge472xalRoge472xalover 16 years ago
Seamless and Perfect

The fabric you weave is flawless, with, I feel, a depth of emotional understanding (for the goodies, that is!) that floats the reader through the skein right up to the bump of reality that is the voting!

Good Luck with your exams!

wahiawagirlwahiawagirlover 16 years ago
I'm not normally impatient...

but I have to admit, just like the other person, I have been checking everyday just to see if you have posted another chapter. It has gotten to a point where you are in my bookmark. I know, I'm sad, but I really love this story. It has really trapped me and I am always thinking what could possibly happen next between Luke and Becks. Well, I'll be waiting. Thanks sharing your imagination with us!

marexotic18marexotic18about 16 years ago
Ahh!!

I loved this!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I was getting annoyed with the main character, but she really redeemed herself in this chapter, and it helped understand a lot of her past decisions. Yay!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
You're killing us!!

CHAPTER EIGHT! CHAPTER EIGHT! CHAPTER EIGHT!!!

:D

TricialenTricialenabout 16 years ago
This is Agony!

I love the way you didn't drag out Luke and Becks getting back together. What did Daniel do to Luke? Chloe is a liar! Chapter 8 please.......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Bang!

you are killing me!! lol Very, very well written! had me on the edge of my seat

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
hurry

hurry up....waiting in antisipication for chapter 8

JoyousWarriorWomanJoyousWarriorWomanabout 16 years ago
Please Finish

Great so far, but please finish! I would love to read the rest... When you finish it. Good characters,too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Love this story!

OMG I love this story and I think I'm in love with Luke!! What a guy!! Please hurry with the next chapters! This story is fantastic! Terrific writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Come on!! Finish the story!!

I see you're writing again! It'd be great if you'd finish this story! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
hell yes!

Much better :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
I love Luke!!

My this is a good story. I love LUke.

I wish guys are this sweet and sensitive. :)

Keep up the good work. YOu are a good writer.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 14 years ago
It just keeps getting better

Now I'm really caught up in this story. There are so many subplot going on in the story. What happened between Luke and Chloe? What did Daniel and his friends do to Luke? What secrets does Luke have? What will happen to Rebecca's mum? Sorry, I can't spend much time writing more comments here--I have to read the next chapter.

labellenuitlabellenuitover 13 years ago
Ahhh,

this story is so beautiful. :') <3

i can't believe he heard her! :O i'd have died of embarrassment. |:!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well

It is unlikely u will be reading this unless U'r a serious Lily fan but a strange mark of the quality and appeal is that a none erotic Ch has 27,500 opens where earlier Chapters were closer to 20,000!

tres_jolietres_joliealmost 13 years ago
WOW!

I know I've gushed about your other story already, but let me embarrass myself again by being as inarticulate as to merely say WOW! Gripping romantic story. Write more please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
DID NOT SEE THIS COMING!

When I read the part where Daniel accusingly said "You!" I had thought they must have met at the hotel where Rebecca was staying. But the Chloe twist was something. Total head-spinner.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Your stitches holding the story together...

are worthy of the surgeon Foster himself.

The plot construction here is so deft---the stitches turn up early in the story as Luke's profession is revealed, again as the plot progresses and then...well, that would be getting ahead of the story.

An exquisite piece of work.

micmaddymicmaddyover 11 years ago
Great story

I stumbled across this gem via highest score. I am so grateful. I hope you've published a story in book form or plan to...your talent shouldn't be kept secret. Thank you for the entertainment. Kudos.

Latinlover15Latinlover15over 11 years ago
Whoa

What a roller coaster..

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
love love love it.

i'm re-reading your story a third time. and i think i'll be back again another time whenever i feel the need to feel all warm and tingly and in love. great job :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Literally my favorite story on the internet

^ Yeah

UpHillAllUpHillAllabout 11 years ago

thanks for writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Don't even care about the sex anymore! In love with the storyline!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Who needs sex? Ha ha

Yup I agree...I love this story. We don't need the sex. Ha ha

Sxualchocol8Sxualchocol8over 5 years ago
Ooohhhkkkaaayyy...

I read it. And I'm glad, DAMNIT! :)

Sc8

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Way too many....

....unbelievable coincidences. England has literally thousands of hospitals...nuff said?

Lions86Lions86over 2 years ago

agree with anon. I get it's a story and unbelievable shit happens in stories but I mean there comes a time when it's just too unbelievable.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Rapport; the opposite of cognitive dissonance.

Another of your plot devices which is none too common in social circles. It leads to ending each other's sentences as well as hopefully indicating

the existence of 'soul-mates'.

(Heart on a sleeve syndrome?)

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