by evanslily
I'm so glad to see a new chapter of this story! Glad to hear you did well on your exam; especially if it means more chapters.
So glad to see you working on this one again... And the return of the very yummy Luke is greatly appreciated, too. I like what you did with his side of the story - turning a negative to a positive. I hate that his reputation is still on the line, so to speak, but I imagine that will be dealt with as well. Congrats on your exams, and thanks for sharing your stories!
Great chapter! I felt pretty sure that Chloe had not been entirely truthful. I love how Luke calls her Becks and babe. And just how vertically challenged is he? No matter, because he sounds absolutely delicious in every other way, and a keeper to boot!
I only recently discovered your stories and I am VERY impressed. You're definitely one of my favorite authors here now...keep up the great work!
Hi!
The way you segued into the chapter was very creative and it was in keeping with their other late night/early morning chats.
Returning to my earlier comment...it felt different, huh? Perhaps, it was from something as simple as Luke made love to her bareback? Or, maybe, it was from something more complicated as Becks and Luke are falling in love?
Although, with everything that's been happening in Rebecca's life, I wouldn't be surprised if she's forgotten to take her birth control pills and, well, uh oh!
Congrats on passing your exam!
More, please?
--ny
It looks as if you could be a professional
writer if you wanted. Good luck to you
Thank you so much for writing such a great chapter. I get so excited when I see another submission from you :)
Well worth the wait. This one can be a real nailbiter if you let it be. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
he didn't use a condom that was thw difference wasn't it?? i can hardly wait for the next chapter
This was fabulous and well worth the wait. I particularly enjoy the forshadowing -- you're quite good at it. And it's completely selfish of me, but I'm delighted your exams are over (congratulations on passing!) because that means more of Becks & Luke much sooner! Count me as another that feels you could do extremely well writing professionally.
It was such a nice surprise to log on and find another chapter of this truly wonderful story! You are definitely a gifted writer drawing the reader into the story, leaving us constantly wanting more and not wanting it to end! I'm so glad to hear your exams are complete and you passed! Congratulations on passing and on completing yet another wonderful chapter to this amazing story! Hope to see more chapters of this and Back to the Farm again soon! Happy Writing!!!
to add something meaningful to the previous comments but, alas, I'm only able to add more of the same! This was worth waiting for! I am entertained by your style, your command of the language and your vivid imagination. Thank you for the time, energy and talent you put into entertaining your readers and congratulations on successfully completing your exam.
Well worth the wait!!! Can't wait for the next installment. Your stories are fabulous!!
I love him. You have created an all most perfect hero and I can't hardly wait for more.
And congratulations on passing your exams.
Thanks for finally getting us a new chapter! Congrats on passing your exams!! Can't wait to read more!! :-)
That's the first adjective that leaps to mind to describe your writing. That you can do this while preparing for exams is all the more impressive. Gorgeous, simply gorgeous.
I just started reading your writing recently, and this story is so wonderfully romantic! Love the sense of humor in it as well. Great job on conveying the complex emotions of the characters. Thanks so much for writing, and congrats on passing your exam!
lukes so sweet, and rebecca's perfect for him. cant WAIT for the next one installment!!!!!! i wish i would find a guy like Luke, so sensitive and caring and also hot.
This is the best story that I have read. You are an wonderful writer. Thank you for making me smile today.
I've been checking daily for the next chapter. PLEASE!! It's killing me. I have an idea where this is going, but your writing is awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next. But please...make it soon! I've re-read the whole thing probably 5 times!
We want more, we want moooooooooooooooore!Please...
I am D Y I N G to read the next chapter. I have been checking back every day for the past week... Next chapter, please! Pretty please!
is killing mee
pleasee hurry up
and continue back to the farm
im absoulutely in love w/ that story
I'm getting so into this story, and all your other stories as well. I'm literally DYING over here to read the next chapter!! I check everyday - you're the only reason I come back to this site. Keep up the great work, you're so talented!
This has to be the most intense story I have read on here - and I have read alot. The whole time I've been dying to read faster so i could know what happened sooner. You are honestly a fantastic writer. :)
...until you'd finished this story in its entirety before I started reading. Otherwise, I would have been sitting on pins and needles awaiting the next chapter. This is one of the best stories I've read on Literotica! You're the best.
I really just love your characters. They have the just right amount of every characteristic I love. The only way I'd love your story any more is if it was in book form and I got to have the yummy new-book smell while I read lol
Great story you have here. I love it- on EVERY level:)
and congrats on you passing your exam!
I love the new book smell too. Never met anyone who liked to smell their book every time they read it. Until now.
Oh-Oh!
He didn't use a condom this time!
I predict a baby on the way!
Great story.
"I did not hit her, it's not true, it's bulshit, I did not hit her, I did naht... O hai Daniel"
WOW. The Choe story and everything else should be quite interesting at a family gathering.
A study of living a Paradox.
(more than one doctor working on or talking about a patient or case?)
Acceptance of conflicting ideas. (Waiting to see how it turns out?)